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From: Ken Reed <kreed002@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Clear trailing whitespace from network-servers section of handbood
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>Number:         181075
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Clear trailing whitespace from network-servers section of handbood
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    wblock
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Aug 05 18:40:01 UTC 2013
>Closed-Date:    Mon Aug 05 19:22:29 UTC 2013
>Last-Modified:  Mon Aug  5 19:30:00 UTC 2013
>Originator:     Ken Reed
>Release:        9.1-Release-p5
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD chaos 9.1-RELEASE-p5 FreeBSD 9.1-RELEASE-p5 #0: Sat Jul 27 01:14:23 UTC 2013     root@amd64-builder.daemonology.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC  amd64
>Description:
Removed trailing whitespace where found from en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers.

A minor update, but a necessary one at some point.
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	(revision 42494)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	(working copy)
@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@
 	more information about using rc scripts.</para>
 
       <para>NFS services can now be started by running the following
-	command, on the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server, as 
+	command, on the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server, as
 	<username>root</username>:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service nfsd start</userinput></screen>
@@ -2914,7 +2914,7 @@
       <para>There will be a request for the password specified
 	earlier, and the output should look like this:</para>
 
-      <screen>Enter LDAP Password: 
+      <screen>Enter LDAP Password:
 adding new entry "dc=example,dc=com"
 
 adding new entry "cn=Manager,dc=example,dc=com"</screen>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->wblock 
Responsible-Changed-By: wblock 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Aug 5 19:07:36 UTC 2013 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=181075 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/181075: commit references a PR
Date: Mon,  5 Aug 2013 19:16:16 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: wblock
 Date: Mon Aug  5 19:16:03 2013
 New Revision: 42496
 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42496
 
 Log:
   Move programlistings outside of paragraphs.  Remove a space after a prompt
   as mentioned in PR docs/181075.  Because this is inside a screen element,
   it is really content, not whitespace.
   
   PR:		docs/181075 (partial)
   Submitted by:	Ken Reed <kreed002@gmail.com>
 
 Modified:
   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
 
 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Mon Aug  5 15:41:48 2013	(r42495)
 +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Mon Aug  5 19:16:03 2013	(r42496)
 @@ -1545,25 +1545,25 @@ Exports list on foobar:
  
  	  <procedure>
  	    <step>
 -	      <para><programlisting>nisdomainname="test-domain"</programlisting>
 +	      <programlisting>nisdomainname="test-domain"</programlisting>
  
 -		This line will set the NIS domainname to
 +		<para>This line will set the NIS domainname to
  		<literal>test-domain</literal>
  		upon network setup (e.g., after reboot).</para>
  	    </step>
  
  	    <step>
 -	      <para><programlisting>nis_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
 +	      <programlisting>nis_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
  
 -		This will tell FreeBSD to start up the NIS server
 +		<para>This will tell FreeBSD to start up the NIS server
  		processes when the networking is next brought
  		up.</para>
  	    </step>
  
  	    <step>
 -	      <para><programlisting>nis_yppasswdd_enable="YES"</programlisting>
 +	      <programlisting>nis_yppasswdd_enable="YES"</programlisting>
  
 -		This will enable the <command>rpc.yppasswdd</command>
 +		<para>This will enable the <command>rpc.yppasswdd</command>
  		daemon which, as mentioned above, will allow users to
  		change their NIS password from a client
  		machine.</para>
 @@ -2914,7 +2914,7 @@ cn: Manager</programlisting>
        <para>There will be a request for the password specified
  	earlier, and the output should look like this:</para>
  
 -      <screen>Enter LDAP Password: 
 +      <screen>Enter LDAP Password:
  adding new entry "dc=example,dc=com"
  
  adding new entry "cn=Manager,dc=example,dc=com"</screen>
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: wblock 
State-Changed-When: Mon Aug 5 19:21:57 UTC 2013 
State-Changed-Why:  
Changes committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=181075 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/181075: commit references a PR
Date: Mon,  5 Aug 2013 19:21:44 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: wblock
 Date: Mon Aug  5 19:21:36 2013
 New Revision: 42497
 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42497
 
 Log:
   Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.
   
   PR:		docs/181075 (partial)
   Submitted by:	Ken Reed <kreed002@gmail.com>
 
 Modified:
   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
 
 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Mon Aug  5 19:16:03 2013	(r42496)
 +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Mon Aug  5 19:21:36 2013	(r42497)
 @@ -820,7 +820,7 @@ mountd_flags="-r"</programlisting>
  	more information about using rc scripts.</para>
  
        <para>NFS services can now be started by running the following
 -	command, on the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server, as 
 +	command, on the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server, as
  	<username>root</username>:</para>
  
        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service nfsd start</userinput></screen>
 @@ -1547,7 +1547,7 @@ Exports list on foobar:
  	    <step>
  	      <programlisting>nisdomainname="test-domain"</programlisting>
  
 -		<para>This line will set the NIS domainname to
 +	      <para>This line will set the NIS domainname to
  		<literal>test-domain</literal>
  		upon network setup (e.g., after reboot).</para>
  	    </step>
 @@ -1555,7 +1555,7 @@ Exports list on foobar:
  	    <step>
  	      <programlisting>nis_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
  
 -		<para>This will tell FreeBSD to start up the NIS server
 +	      <para>This will tell FreeBSD to start up the NIS server
  		processes when the networking is next brought
  		up.</para>
  	    </step>
 @@ -1563,10 +1563,10 @@ Exports list on foobar:
  	    <step>
  	      <programlisting>nis_yppasswdd_enable="YES"</programlisting>
  
 -		<para>This will enable the <command>rpc.yppasswdd</command>
 -		daemon which, as mentioned above, will allow users to
 -		change their NIS password from a client
 -		machine.</para>
 +	      <para>This will enable the
 +		<command>rpc.yppasswdd</command> daemon which, as
 +		mentioned above, will allow users to change their NIS
 +		password from a client machine.</para>
  	    </step>
  	  </procedure>
  
 @@ -4383,7 +4383,8 @@ mail            IN      A       192.168.
  
      <sect2>
        <title><acronym
 -	  role="Domain Name Security Extensions">DNSSEC</acronym></title>
 +	  role="Domain Name Security
 +	  Extensions">DNSSEC</acronym></title>
  
        <indexterm>
  	<primary>BIND</primary>
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