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From: Ken Reed <kreed002@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Update to Network-NFS Documentation
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>Number:         180955
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Update to Network-NFS Documentation
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    brd
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Jul 30 20:40:00 UTC 2013
>Closed-Date:    Thu Aug 01 15:10:39 UTC 2013
>Last-Modified:  Thu Aug  1 15:20:00 UTC 2013
>Originator:     Ken Reed
>Release:        9.1-Release-p5
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD chaos 9.1-RELEASE-p5 FreeBSD 9.1-RELEASE-p5 #0: Sat Jul 27 01:14:23 UTC 2013     root@amd64-builder.daemonology.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC  amd64
>Description:
Updating NFS doc to use services instead of specific binaries.  Also offered a couple of minor points of clarification in the text.
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	(revision 42478)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	(working copy)
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 id="network-inetd-conf">
-      <!-- XXX This section isn't very clear, and could do with some lovin' -->
+      <!-- XXX This section is not very clear and could do with some tlc -->
       <title><filename>inetd.conf</filename></title>
 
       <para>Configuration of <application>inetd</application> is
@@ -819,20 +819,15 @@
       <para>Please refer to <xref linkend="configtuning-rcd"/> for
 	more information about using rc scripts.</para>
 
-      <para>Alternatively, a reboot will make FreeBSD set everything
-	up properly.  A reboot is not necessary though.
-	Executing the following commands as <username>root</username>
-	should start everything up.</para>
+      <para>NFS services can now be started by running the following
+	command, on the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server, as 
+	<username>root</username>:</para>
 
-      <para>On the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server:</para>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service nfsd start</userinput></screen>
 
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>rpcbind</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>nfsd -u -t -n 4</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>mountd -r</userinput></screen>
-
       <para>On the <acronym>NFS</acronym> client:</para>
 
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>nfsiod -n 4</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service nfsclient restart</userinput></screen>
 
       <para>Now everything should be ready to actually mount a remote
 	file system.  In these examples the server's name will be
@@ -1609,7 +1604,7 @@
 	    good reason, never propagate passwords for
 	    <username>root</username> and other administrative
 	    accounts to all the servers in the NIS domain.  Therefore,
-	    before the the NIS maps are initialized, configure the
+	    before the NIS maps are initialized, configure the
 	    primary password files:</para>
 
 	  <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cp /etc/master.passwd /var/yp/master.passwd</userinput>
@@ -1649,7 +1644,7 @@
 Questions will all be asked at the beginning of the procedure.
 Do you want this procedure to quit on non-fatal errors? [y/n: n] <userinput>n</userinput>
 Ok, please remember to go back and redo manually whatever fails.
-If you don't, something might not work.
+If not, something might not work.
 At this point, we have to construct a list of this domains YP servers.
 rod.darktech.org is already known as master server.
 Please continue to add any slave servers, one per line. When you are
@@ -1711,7 +1706,7 @@
 Do you want this procedure to quit on non-fatal errors? [y/n: n]  <userinput>n</userinput>
 
 Ok, please remember to go back and redo manually whatever fails.
-If you don't, something might not work.
+If not, something might not work.
 There will be no further questions. The remainder of the procedure
 should take a few minutes, to copy the databases from ellington.
 Transferring netgroup...
@@ -1756,7 +1751,7 @@
 ypxfr: Exiting: Map successfully transferred
 
 coltrane has been setup as an YP slave server without any errors.
-Don't forget to update map ypservers on ellington.</screen>
+Remember to update map ypservers on ellington.</screen>
 
 	  <para>There should be a directory called
 	    <filename>/var/yp/test-domain</filename>.  Copies of the


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->brd 
Responsible-Changed-By: brd 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Aug 1 15:03:58 UTC 2013 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Grab 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=180955 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: brd 
State-Changed-When: Thu Aug 1 15:10:26 UTC 2013 
State-Changed-Why:  
- Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=180955 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/180955: commit references a PR
Date: Thu,  1 Aug 2013 15:10:32 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: brd
 Date: Thu Aug  1 15:10:19 2013
 New Revision: 42483
 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42483
 
 Log:
   - Updating NFS doc to use services instead of specific binaries. Also offered a couple of minor points of clarification in the text.
   - Clean up some contractions and a double the.
   
   PR:		180955
   Submitted by:	Ken Reed <kreed002@gmail.com>
   Reviewed by:	bjk, Allan Jude
 
 Modified:
   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
 
 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Thu Aug  1 03:09:47 2013	(r42482)
 +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Thu Aug  1 15:10:19 2013	(r42483)
 @@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
      </sect2>
  
      <sect2 id="network-inetd-conf">
 -      <!-- XXX This section isn't very clear, and could do with some lovin' -->
 +      <!-- XXX This section is not very clear and could do with some tlc -->
        <title><filename>inetd.conf</filename></title>
  
        <para>Configuration of <application>inetd</application> is
 @@ -819,20 +819,15 @@ mountd_flags="-r"</programlisting>
        <para>Please refer to <xref linkend="configtuning-rcd"/> for
  	more information about using rc scripts.</para>
  
 -      <para>Alternatively, a reboot will make FreeBSD set everything
 -	up properly.  A reboot is not necessary though.
 -	Executing the following commands as <username>root</username>
 -	should start everything up.</para>
 -
 -      <para>On the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server:</para>
 -
 -      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>rpcbind</userinput>
 -&prompt.root; <userinput>nfsd -u -t -n 4</userinput>
 -&prompt.root; <userinput>mountd -r</userinput></screen>
 +      <para>NFS services can now be started by running the following
 +	command, on the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server, as 
 +	<username>root</username>:</para>
 +
 +      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service nfsd start</userinput></screen>
  
        <para>On the <acronym>NFS</acronym> client:</para>
  
 -      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>nfsiod -n 4</userinput></screen>
 +      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service nfsclient restart</userinput></screen>
  
        <para>Now everything should be ready to actually mount a remote
  	file system.  In these examples the server's name will be
 @@ -1609,7 +1604,7 @@ Exports list on foobar:
  	    good reason, never propagate passwords for
  	    <username>root</username> and other administrative
  	    accounts to all the servers in the NIS domain.  Therefore,
 -	    before the the NIS maps are initialized, configure the
 +	    before the NIS maps are initialized, configure the
  	    primary password files:</para>
  
  	  <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cp /etc/master.passwd /var/yp/master.passwd</userinput>
 @@ -1649,7 +1644,7 @@ Creating an YP server will require that 
  Questions will all be asked at the beginning of the procedure.
  Do you want this procedure to quit on non-fatal errors? [y/n: n] <userinput>n</userinput>
  Ok, please remember to go back and redo manually whatever fails.
 -If you don't, something might not work.
 +If not, something might not work.
  At this point, we have to construct a list of this domains YP servers.
  rod.darktech.org is already known as master server.
  Please continue to add any slave servers, one per line. When you are
 @@ -1711,7 +1706,7 @@ Questions will all be asked at the begin
  Do you want this procedure to quit on non-fatal errors? [y/n: n]  <userinput>n</userinput>
  
  Ok, please remember to go back and redo manually whatever fails.
 -If you don't, something might not work.
 +If not, something might not work.
  There will be no further questions. The remainder of the procedure
  should take a few minutes, to copy the databases from ellington.
  Transferring netgroup...
 @@ -1756,7 +1751,7 @@ Transferring hosts.byname...
  ypxfr: Exiting: Map successfully transferred
  
  coltrane has been setup as an YP slave server without any errors.
 -Don't forget to update map ypservers on ellington.</screen>
 +Remember to update map ypservers on ellington.</screen>
  
  	  <para>There should be a directory called
  	    <filename>/var/yp/test-domain</filename>.  Copies of the
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