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Date: Fri, 24 May 2013 02:54:12 GMT
From: Li <fender0107401@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: A typo.
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>Number:         178890
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       A typo.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri May 24 03:00:00 UTC 2013
>Closed-Date:    Fri May 24 07:45:44 UTC 2013
>Last-Modified:  Fri May 24 07:50:00 UTC 2013
>Originator:     Li
>Release:        9.1 Release
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls-ipfw.html

31.6. IPFW

IPFW) is a stateful firewall written for FreeBSD which also provides a traffic shaper, packet scheduler, and in-kernel NAT.

Change "IPFW)" to "IPFW".

That should be a typo.

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BTW:

The original description looks like someone developed IPFW for FreeBSD. Can you change this description to something like the following: 

IPFW is a stateful firewall written by FreeBSD community.

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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: pluknet 
State-Changed-When: Fri May 24 07:43:41 UTC 2013 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 
As for the latter, it's better to discuss this on freebsd-doc@ mailing list. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=178890 

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To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/178890: commit references a PR
Date: Fri, 24 May 2013 07:40:55 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: pluknet
 Date: Fri May 24 07:40:47 2013
 New Revision: 41739
 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41739
 
 Log:
   Fix a typo.
   
   PR:		docs/178890
   Submitted by:	Li <fender0107401@gmail.com>
 
 Modified:
   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml
 
 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml	Thu May 23 20:30:42 2013	(r41738)
 +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml	Fri May 24 07:40:47 2013	(r41739)
 @@ -1974,7 +1974,7 @@ pass in quick on rl0 proto tcp from any 
        <secondary>IPFW</secondary>
      </indexterm>
  
 -    <para><acronym>IPFW</acronym>) is a stateful firewall written for
 +    <para><acronym>IPFW</acronym> is a stateful firewall written for
        &os; which also provides a traffic shaper, packet scheduler,
        and in-kernel NAT.</para>
  
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