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From: Benjamin Washington-Yule <byu17@uclive.ac.nz>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Out of date information in the Virtualization section of Handbook
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>Number:         170286
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [handbook] [patch] Out of date information in the Virtualization section of Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    issyl0
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Jul 30 21:40:08 UTC 2012
>Closed-Date:    Tue Jul 31 08:40:34 UTC 2012
>Last-Modified:  Tue Jul 31 08:40:34 UTC 2012
>Originator:     Benjamin Washington-Yule
>Release:        n/a
>Organization:
n/a
>Environment:
n/a
>Description:
The information at the beginning of section 23.3 ("FreeBSD as a Host OS") is out of date with regards to VirtualBox and previously named open source edition (OSE). There is only one version now.

See https://www.virtualbox.org/wiki/Editions for details of the change.
>How-To-Repeat:
n/a
>Fix:
Corrected text.

Patch attached with submission follows:

1117c1117,1118
<       the release of &os;&nbsp;7.2, Sun's
---
>       the release of &os;&nbsp;7.2, the Open Source Edition
>       (<acronym>OSE</acronym>) of Sun's
1125,1131c1126,1133
<       like guests.  It is released as open source software, but with
<       closed-source components available in a separate extension pack.  
<       These components include support for USB 2.0 devices, among others.
<       More information may be found on the <quote>Downloads</quote> page
<       of the <application>&virtualbox;</application> wiki, at
<       <ulink url="http://www.virtualbox.org/wiki/Downloads"></ulink>.
<       Currently, these extensions are not available for &os;.</para>
---
>       like guests.  It comes in two flavors, an open source and a
>       proprietary edition.  From the user's point of view, perhaps the
>       most important limitation of the <acronym>OSE</acronym> is the
>       lack of USB support.  Other differences may be found in the
>       <quote>Editions</quote> page of the
>       <application>&virtualbox;</application> wiki, at
>       <ulink url="http://www.virtualbox.org/wiki/Editions"></ulink>.
>       Currently, only the OSE is available for &os;.</para>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Benjamin <byu17@uclive.ac.nz>
To: <bug-followup@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/170286: [handbook] [patch] Out of date information in the
 Virtualization section of Handbook
Date: Tue, 31 Jul 2012 10:03:39 +1200

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 Please find attached unified diff
 
 
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 --- chapter_editied.sgml	2012-07-31 09:29:02.000000000 +1200
 +++ chapter.sgml	2012-07-31 09:13:51.000000000 +1200
 @@ -1114,7 +1114,8 @@
        <application>VMware</application> (like
        <filename role="package">emulators/vmware3</filename>), which
        utilized the &linux; binary compatibility layer.  Shortly after
 -      the release of &os;&nbsp;7.2, Sun's
 +      the release of &os;&nbsp;7.2, the Open Source Edition
 +      (<acronym>OSE</acronym>) of Sun's
        <application>&virtualbox;</application> appeared in the
        Ports&nbsp;Collection as a native &os; program.</para>
  
 @@ -1122,13 +1123,14 @@
        developed, complete virtualization package, that is available
        for most operating systems including &windows;, &macos;, &linux;
        and &os;.  It is equally capable at running &windows; or &unix;
 -      like guests.  It is released as open source software, but with
 -      closed-source components available in a separate extension pack.  
 -      These components include support for USB 2.0 devices, among others.
 -      More information may be found on the <quote>Downloads</quote> page
 -      of the <application>&virtualbox;</application> wiki, at
 -      <ulink url="http://www.virtualbox.org/wiki/Downloads"></ulink>.
 -      Currently, these extensions are not available for &os;.</para>
 +      like guests.  It comes in two flavors, an open source and a
 +      proprietary edition.  From the user's point of view, perhaps the
 +      most important limitation of the <acronym>OSE</acronym> is the
 +      lack of USB support.  Other differences may be found in the
 +      <quote>Editions</quote> page of the
 +      <application>&virtualbox;</application> wiki, at
 +      <ulink url="http://www.virtualbox.org/wiki/Editions"></ulink>.
 +      Currently, only the OSE is available for &os;.</para>
  
      <sect2 id="virtualization-virtualbox-install">
        <title>Installing &virtualbox;</title>
 
 --------------010902090102050107010808--
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->issyl0 
Responsible-Changed-By: issyl0 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Jul 30 22:55:37 UTC 2012 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take it. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=170286 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/170286: commit references a PR
Date: Tue, 31 Jul 2012 08:38:41 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: issyl0
 Date: Tue Jul 31 08:38:27 2012
 New Revision: 39283
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39283
 
 Log:
   Update the virtualization chapter of the Handbook: there is no longer the
   named OSE version of VirtualBox.
   
   PR:		docs/170286
   Submitted by:	Benjamin Washington-Yule (byu17 (at) uclive.ac.nz)
   Approved by:	gjb (mentor)
 
 Modified:
   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml
 
 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml	Sun Jul 29 19:12:09 2012	(r39282)
 +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml	Tue Jul 31 08:38:27 2012	(r39283)
 @@ -1114,8 +1114,7 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
        <application>VMware</application> (like
        <filename role="package">emulators/vmware3</filename>), which
        utilized the &linux; binary compatibility layer.  Shortly after
 -      the release of &os;&nbsp;7.2, the Open Source Edition
 -      (<acronym>OSE</acronym>) of Sun's
 +      the release of &os;&nbsp;7.2, Sun's
        <application>&virtualbox;</application> appeared in the
        Ports&nbsp;Collection as a native &os; program.</para>
  
 @@ -1123,14 +1122,13 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
        developed, complete virtualization package, that is available
        for most operating systems including &windows;, &macos;, &linux;
        and &os;.  It is equally capable at running &windows; or &unix;
 -      like guests.  It comes in two flavors, an open source and a
 -      proprietary edition.  From the user's point of view, perhaps the
 -      most important limitation of the <acronym>OSE</acronym> is the
 -      lack of USB support.  Other differences may be found in the
 -      <quote>Editions</quote> page of the
 -      <application>&virtualbox;</application> wiki, at
 -      <ulink url="http://www.virtualbox.org/wiki/Editions"></ulink>.
 -      Currently, only the OSE is available for &os;.</para>
 +      like guests.  It is released as open source software, but with
 +      closed-source components available in a separate extension pack.  
 +      These components include support for USB 2.0 devices, among others.
 +      More information may be found on the <quote>Downloads</quote> page
 +      of the <application>&virtualbox;</application> wiki, at
 +      <ulink url="http://www.virtualbox.org/wiki/Downloads"></ulink>.
 +      Currently, these extensions are not available for &os;.</para>
  
      <sect2 id="virtualization-virtualbox-install">
        <title>Installing &virtualbox;</title>
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: issyl0 
State-Changed-When: Tue Jul 31 08:40:33 UTC 2012 
State-Changed-Why:  
Thanks for this, the update has now been committed. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=170286 
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