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Subject: fbp-primer - misspelled name in translations/chapter.sgml
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>Number:         16136
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       fbp-primer - typo in writing-style/chapter.sgml
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Jan 15 16:00:00 PST 2000
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jan 16 14:13:31 PST 2000
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jan 16 14:14:07 PST 2000
>Originator:     Karlheinz Eckmeier
>Release:        FreeBSD 3.3-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

	doc-all from cvsup.de.FreeBSD.org ( release=cvs tag=. )

>Description:

	There is a typo in writing-style/chapter.sgml
	"sentance" should be "sentence"

>How-To-Repeat:

	

>Fix:
	

*** en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml.orig	Tue Dec 14 18:04:06 1999
--- en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml	Sun Jan 16 01:03:07 2000
***************
*** 317,323 ****
  	commit, without having to decide whether a line has changed because of
  	the content, or just because it has been refilled.</para>
  
!       <para>For example, if you have added two sentances to a paragraph, such
  	that the line lengths on the paragraph now go over 80 columns, first
  	commit your change with the too-long line lengths.  Then fix the line
  	wrapping, and commit this second change.  In the commit message for
--- 317,323 ----
  	commit, without having to decide whether a line has changed because of
  	the content, or just because it has been refilled.</para>
  
!       <para>For example, if you have added two sentences to a paragraph, such
  	that the line lengths on the paragraph now go over 80 columns, first
  	commit your change with the too-long line lengths.  Then fix the line
  	wrapping, and commit this second change.  In the commit message for

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: asmodai 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jan 16 14:13:31 PST 2000 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed in rev 1.7 of the writing-style chapter. 

Thanks! 
>Unformatted:
