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Date: Wed, 28 Sep 2011 01:58:30 GMT
From: Ben Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] grammar and markup in script.1
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>Number:         161088
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] grammar and markup in script.1
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    gjb
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Sep 28 02:00:19 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:    Mon Oct 10 11:08:14 UTC 2011
>Last-Modified:  Mon Oct 10 11:20:03 UTC 2011
>Originator:     Ben Kaduk
>Release:        10-current
>Organization:
MIT SIPB
>Environment:
n/a
>Description:
There are grammar errors in script.1.  This patch fixes them.
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

--- script.1.orig	2011-09-27 21:36:39.000000000 -0400
+++ script.1	2011-09-27 21:55:29.000000000 -0400
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 .\"	@(#)script.1	8.1 (Berkeley) 6/6/93
 .\" $FreeBSD: src/usr.bin/script/script.1,v 1.25 2011/09/27 18:14:04 trociny Exp $
 .\"
-.Dd January 22, 2004
+.Dd September 27, 2011
 .Dt SCRIPT 1
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -73,15 +73,16 @@
 .Pa typescript ,
 retaining the prior contents.
 .It Fl k
-Log keys sent to program as well as output.
+Log keys sent to the program as well as output.
 .It Fl q
 Run in quiet mode, omit the start and stop status messages.
 .It Fl t Ar time
-Specify time interval between flushing script output file.
+Specify the interval at which the script output file will be flushed
+to disk, in seconds.
 A value of 0
 causes
 .Nm
-to flush for every character I/O event.
+to flush after every character I/O event.
 The default interval is
 30 seconds.
 .El
@@ -136,13 +137,15 @@
 .Ev SHELL
 is not set, the Bourne shell
 is assumed.
-(Most shells set this variable automatically).
+.Pq Most shells set this variable automatically .
 .El
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr csh 1
-(for the
+.Po
+for the
 .Em history
-mechanism).
+mechanism
+.Pc .
 .Sh HISTORY
 The
 .Nm
@@ -165,13 +168,15 @@
 The slave terminal mode is checked
 for ECHO mode to check when to avoid manual echo logging.
 This does not
-work when in a raw mode where the program being run is doing manual echo.
+work when the terminal is in a raw mode where
+the program being run is doing manual echo.
 .Pp
-If the
+If
 .Nm
-reads zero bytes from the terminal it switches to a mode when it probes read
-only once a second until it gets some data.
-This prevents the
+reads zero bytes from the terminal, it switches to a mode when it
+only attempts to read
+once a second until there is data to read.
+This prevents
 .Nm
-spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
-processing of the user input.
+from spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
+processing of user input.


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: gjb 
State-Changed-When: Thu Sep 29 02:29:46 UTC 2011 
State-Changed-Why:  
Patched in HEAD.  MFC in 1 week (pending MFC of 225809). 



Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->gjb 
Responsible-Changed-By: gjb 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Sep 29 02:29:46 UTC 2011 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Over to me. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=161088 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/161088: commit references a PR
Date: Thu, 29 Sep 2011 02:29:41 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: gjb (doc committer)
 Date: Thu Sep 29 02:29:32 2011
 New Revision: 225857
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/225857
 
 Log:
   Fix a few grammar and mdoc nits in script.1
   
   PR:		161088
   Submitted by:	Ben Kaduk ( kaduk % mit ! edu )
   MFC after:	1 week
   Need-MFC:	225809
 
 Modified:
   head/usr.bin/script/script.1
 
 Modified: head/usr.bin/script/script.1
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/usr.bin/script/script.1	Thu Sep 29 00:44:34 2011	(r225856)
 +++ head/usr.bin/script/script.1	Thu Sep 29 02:29:32 2011	(r225857)
 @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
  .\"	@(#)script.1	8.1 (Berkeley) 6/6/93
  .\" $FreeBSD$
  .\"
 -.Dd January 22, 2004
 +.Dd September 28, 2011
  .Dt SCRIPT 1
  .Os
  .Sh NAME
 @@ -73,15 +73,16 @@ or
  .Pa typescript ,
  retaining the prior contents.
  .It Fl k
 -Log keys sent to program as well as output.
 +Log keys sent to the program as well as output.
  .It Fl q
  Run in quiet mode, omit the start and stop status messages.
  .It Fl t Ar time
 -Specify time interval between flushing script output file.
 +Specify the interval at which the script output file will be flushed
 +to disk, in seconds.
  A value of 0
  causes
  .Nm
 -to flush for every character I/O event.
 +to flush after every character I/O event.
  The default interval is
  30 seconds.
  .El
 @@ -136,13 +137,15 @@ If
  .Ev SHELL
  is not set, the Bourne shell
  is assumed.
 -(Most shells set this variable automatically).
 +.Pq Most shells set this variable automatically .
  .El
  .Sh SEE ALSO
  .Xr csh 1
 -(for the
 +.Po
 +for the
  .Em history
 -mechanism).
 +mechanism
 +.Pc .
  .Sh HISTORY
  The
  .Nm
 @@ -165,13 +168,15 @@ mode, echo cancelling is far from ideal.
  The slave terminal mode is checked
  for ECHO mode to check when to avoid manual echo logging.
  This does not
 -work when in a raw mode where the program being run is doing manual echo.
 +work when the terminal is in a raw mode where
 +the program being run is doing manual echo.
  .Pp
 -If the
 +If
  .Nm
 -reads zero bytes from the terminal it switches to a mode when it probes read
 -only once a second until it gets some data.
 -This prevents the
 +reads zero bytes from the terminal, it switches to a mode when it
 +only attempts to read
 +once a second until there is data to read.
 +This prevents
  .Nm
 -spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
 -processing of the user input.
 +from spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
 +processing of user input.
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State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: gjb 
State-Changed-When: Mon Oct 10 11:07:45 UTC 2011 
State-Changed-Why:  
MFC'd to 9-STABLE, 8-STABLE, 7-STABLE.  Thanks! 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=161088 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/161088: commit references a PR
Date: Mon, 10 Oct 2011 11:06:12 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: gjb (doc committer)
 Date: Mon Oct 10 11:05:58 2011
 New Revision: 226187
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/226187
 
 Log:
   MFC r225857:
    - Fix a few grammar and mdoc nits in script.1
   
   PR:		161088
   Approved by:	re (kib)
 
 Modified:
   stable/9/usr.bin/script/script.1
 Directory Properties:
   stable/9/usr.bin/script/   (props changed)
 
 Modified: stable/9/usr.bin/script/script.1
 ==============================================================================
 --- stable/9/usr.bin/script/script.1	Mon Oct 10 09:33:07 2011	(r226186)
 +++ stable/9/usr.bin/script/script.1	Mon Oct 10 11:05:58 2011	(r226187)
 @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
  .\"	@(#)script.1	8.1 (Berkeley) 6/6/93
  .\" $FreeBSD$
  .\"
 -.Dd January 22, 2004
 +.Dd September 28, 2011
  .Dt SCRIPT 1
  .Os
  .Sh NAME
 @@ -73,15 +73,16 @@ or
  .Pa typescript ,
  retaining the prior contents.
  .It Fl k
 -Log keys sent to program as well as output.
 +Log keys sent to the program as well as output.
  .It Fl q
  Run in quiet mode, omit the start and stop status messages.
  .It Fl t Ar time
 -Specify time interval between flushing script output file.
 +Specify the interval at which the script output file will be flushed
 +to disk, in seconds.
  A value of 0
  causes
  .Nm
 -to flush for every character I/O event.
 +to flush after every character I/O event.
  The default interval is
  30 seconds.
  .El
 @@ -136,13 +137,15 @@ If
  .Ev SHELL
  is not set, the Bourne shell
  is assumed.
 -(Most shells set this variable automatically).
 +.Pq Most shells set this variable automatically .
  .El
  .Sh SEE ALSO
  .Xr csh 1
 -(for the
 +.Po
 +for the
  .Em history
 -mechanism).
 +mechanism
 +.Pc .
  .Sh HISTORY
  The
  .Nm
 @@ -165,13 +168,15 @@ mode, echo cancelling is far from ideal.
  The slave terminal mode is checked
  for ECHO mode to check when to avoid manual echo logging.
  This does not
 -work when in a raw mode where the program being run is doing manual echo.
 +work when the terminal is in a raw mode where
 +the program being run is doing manual echo.
  .Pp
 -If the
 +If
  .Nm
 -reads zero bytes from the terminal it switches to a mode when it probes read
 -only once a second until it gets some data.
 -This prevents the
 +reads zero bytes from the terminal, it switches to a mode when it
 +only attempts to read
 +once a second until there is data to read.
 +This prevents
  .Nm
 -spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
 -processing of the user input.
 +from spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
 +processing of user input.
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From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/161088: commit references a PR
Date: Mon, 10 Oct 2011 11:07:07 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: gjb (doc committer)
 Date: Mon Oct 10 11:06:48 2011
 New Revision: 226188
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/226188
 
 Log:
   MFC r225857:
    - Fix a few grammar and mdoc nits in script.1
   
   PR:		161088
 
 Modified:
   stable/8/usr.bin/script/script.1
 Directory Properties:
   stable/8/usr.bin/script/   (props changed)
 
 Modified: stable/8/usr.bin/script/script.1
 ==============================================================================
 --- stable/8/usr.bin/script/script.1	Mon Oct 10 11:05:58 2011	(r226187)
 +++ stable/8/usr.bin/script/script.1	Mon Oct 10 11:06:48 2011	(r226188)
 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
  .\"	@(#)script.1	8.1 (Berkeley) 6/6/93
  .\" $FreeBSD$
  .\"
 -.Dd January 22, 2004
 +.Dd September 28, 2011
  .Dt SCRIPT 1
  .Os
  .Sh NAME
 @@ -77,15 +77,16 @@ or
  .Pa typescript ,
  retaining the prior contents.
  .It Fl k
 -Log keys sent to program as well as output.
 +Log keys sent to the program as well as output.
  .It Fl q
  Run in quiet mode, omit the start and stop status messages.
  .It Fl t Ar time
 -Specify time interval between flushing script output file.
 +Specify the interval at which the script output file will be flushed
 +to disk, in seconds.
  A value of 0
  causes
  .Nm
 -to flush for every character I/O event.
 +to flush after every character I/O event.
  The default interval is
  30 seconds.
  .El
 @@ -140,13 +141,15 @@ If
  .Ev SHELL
  is not set, the Bourne shell
  is assumed.
 -(Most shells set this variable automatically).
 +.Pq Most shells set this variable automatically .
  .El
  .Sh SEE ALSO
  .Xr csh 1
 -(for the
 +.Po
 +for the
  .Em history
 -mechanism).
 +mechanism
 +.Pc .
  .Sh HISTORY
  The
  .Nm
 @@ -169,13 +172,15 @@ mode, echo cancelling is far from ideal.
  The slave terminal mode is checked
  for ECHO mode to check when to avoid manual echo logging.
  This does not
 -work when in a raw mode where the program being run is doing manual echo.
 +work when the terminal is in a raw mode where
 +the program being run is doing manual echo.
  .Pp
 -If the
 +If
  .Nm
 -reads zero bytes from the terminal it switches to a mode when it probes read
 -only once a second until it gets some data.
 -This prevents the
 +reads zero bytes from the terminal, it switches to a mode when it
 +only attempts to read
 +once a second until there is data to read.
 +This prevents
  .Nm
 -spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
 -processing of the user input.
 +from spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
 +processing of user input.
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From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/161088: commit references a PR
Date: Mon, 10 Oct 2011 11:11:15 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: gjb (doc committer)
 Date: Mon Oct 10 11:07:36 2011
 New Revision: 226189
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/226189
 
 Log:
   MFC r225857:
    - Fix a few grammar and mdoc nits in script.1
   
   PR:		161088
 
 Modified:
   stable/7/usr.bin/script/script.1
 Directory Properties:
   stable/7/usr.bin/script/   (props changed)
 
 Modified: stable/7/usr.bin/script/script.1
 ==============================================================================
 --- stable/7/usr.bin/script/script.1	Mon Oct 10 11:06:48 2011	(r226188)
 +++ stable/7/usr.bin/script/script.1	Mon Oct 10 11:07:36 2011	(r226189)
 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
  .\"	@(#)script.1	8.1 (Berkeley) 6/6/93
  .\" $FreeBSD$
  .\"
 -.Dd January 22, 2004
 +.Dd September 28, 2011
  .Dt SCRIPT 1
  .Os
  .Sh NAME
 @@ -77,15 +77,16 @@ or
  .Pa typescript ,
  retaining the prior contents.
  .It Fl k
 -Log keys sent to program as well as output.
 +Log keys sent to the program as well as output.
  .It Fl q
  Run in quiet mode, omit the start and stop status messages.
  .It Fl t Ar time
 -Specify time interval between flushing script output file.
 +Specify the interval at which the script output file will be flushed
 +to disk, in seconds.
  A value of 0
  causes
  .Nm
 -to flush for every character I/O event.
 +to flush after every character I/O event.
  The default interval is
  30 seconds.
  .El
 @@ -140,13 +141,15 @@ If
  .Ev SHELL
  is not set, the Bourne shell
  is assumed.
 -(Most shells set this variable automatically).
 +.Pq Most shells set this variable automatically .
  .El
  .Sh SEE ALSO
  .Xr csh 1
 -(for the
 +.Po
 +for the
  .Em history
 -mechanism).
 +mechanism
 +.Pc .
  .Sh HISTORY
  The
  .Nm
 @@ -169,13 +172,15 @@ mode, echo cancelling is far from ideal.
  The slave terminal mode is checked
  for ECHO mode to check when to avoid manual echo logging.
  This does not
 -work when in a raw mode where the program being run is doing manual echo.
 +work when the terminal is in a raw mode where
 +the program being run is doing manual echo.
  .Pp
 -If the
 +If
  .Nm
 -reads zero bytes from the terminal it switches to a mode when it probes read
 -only once a second until it gets some data.
 -This prevents the
 +reads zero bytes from the terminal, it switches to a mode when it
 +only attempts to read
 +once a second until there is data to read.
 +This prevents
  .Nm
 -spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
 -processing of the user input.
 +from spinning on zero-byte reads, but might cause a 1-second delay in
 +processing of user input.
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