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From: Keve Nagy <keve@safe-mail.net>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: incomplete sample in handbook section 27.2.1.2.2
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>Number:         156514
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       incomplete sample in handbook section 27.2.1.2.2
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    ryusuke
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Apr 20 09:40:10 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:    Sun May 01 14:37:37 UTC 2011
>Last-Modified:  Sun May 01 14:37:37 UTC 2011
>Originator:     Keve Nagy
>Release:        N/A
>Organization:
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>Environment:
N/A
>Description:
Handbook section "27.2.1.2.2 PPP and Dynamic IP Addresses" shows a configuration line sample as:
  " 17      set ifaddr 10.0.0.1/0 10.0.0.2/0 255.255.255.255      "
then two paragraphs below refers to "The last argumet (0.0.0.0) tells ...", where that (0.0.0.0) last arguent is obviously missing from the end of that sample line.

>How-To-Repeat:
Please see section 27.2.1.2.2 in 
 http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/userppp.html 
or my highlighted screenshot at
 http://www.wuala.com/keve/public/freebsd.userppp.docbug.png

>Fix:
Add the missing "0.0.0.0" text to the end of the sample config line!


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->ryusuke 
Responsible-Changed-By: ryusuke 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Apr 28 13:50:52 UTC 2011 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=156514 

From: Ryusuke SUZUKI <ryusuke@FreeBSD.org>
To: keve@safe-mail.net
Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org, ryusuke@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/156514: incomplete sample in handbook section 27.2.1.2.2
Date: Sat, 30 Apr 2011 20:25:47 +0900 (JST)

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 Hi, Keve-san.
 
 Thanks for reporting PR: 15614 and preparing your screenshot.
 
 I agree that "0.0.0.0" is needed at the end of the config line.
 
 [Ref: /usr/share/examples/ppp/ppp.conf.sample]
 
 I will commit following patch.
 
 ------------------------------
 --- chapter.sgml	1 Dec 2010 20:37:05 -0000	1.195
 +++ chapter.sgml	30 Apr 2011 11:20:12 -0000
 @@ -591,7 +591,7 @@
  	    <link linkend="userppp-staticIP">PPP and Static IP
  	    Addresses</link>, with the following change:</para>
 
 -	  <programlisting>17      set ifaddr 10.0.0.1/0 10.0.0.2/0 255.255.255.255</programlisting>
 +	  <programlisting>17      set ifaddr 10.0.0.1/0 10.0.0.2/0 255.255.255.255 0.0.0.0</programlisting>
 
  	  <para>Again, do not include the line number, it is just for
  	    reference.  Indentation of at least one space is
 
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 Regards,
   Ryusuke
 
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From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/156514: commit references a PR
Date: Sun,  1 May 2011 14:29:20 +0000 (UTC)

 ryusuke     2011-05-01 14:29:06 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   Add missing "0.0.0.0" to the end of the sample config line.
   
   PR: docs/156514
   Submitted by:   Keve Nagy <keve at safe-mail dot net>
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.196     +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: ryusuke 
State-Changed-When: Sun May 1 14:36:07 UTC 2011 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed. Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=156514 
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