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From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] change "an" -> "a" before &os;
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>Number:         155366
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] change "an" -> "a" before &os;
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    danger
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Mar 08 01:20:08 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:    Tue Mar 08 09:48:27 UTC 2011
>Last-Modified:  Tue Mar 08 09:57:17 UTC 2011
>Originator:     Eitan Adler
>Release:        
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
FreeBSD starts with "F" and should therefore be proceeded by the word "a" and not the word "an"

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
Index: ./articles/committers-guide/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.290
diff -u -r1.290 article.sgml
--- ./articles/committers-guide/article.sgml	31 Jul 2010 10:39:08 -0000	1.290
+++ ./articles/committers-guide/article.sgml	8 Mar 2011 00:53:50 -0000
@@ -1758,7 +1758,7 @@
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>A short guide about fixes which are committed to the &os;
 	    source tree after being detected by &coverity.prevent; and
-	    analyzed by an &os; developer.</para>
+	    analyzed by a &os; developer.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>
Index: ./books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.21
diff -u -r1.21 chapter.sgml
--- ./books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml	4 Sep 2010 20:19:26 -0000	1.21
+++ ./books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml	8 Mar 2011 00:53:50 -0000
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
         <term>hosted (system, process, user, etc.)</term>
         <listitem>
 	  <para>A process, user or other entity, whose access to resources is
-	    restricted by an &os; jail.</para>
+	    restricted by a &os; jail.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>
Index: ./books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.337
diff -u -r1.337 chapter.sgml
--- ./books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	1 Dec 2010 20:37:05 -0000	1.337
+++ ./books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	8 Mar 2011 00:53:50 -0000
@@ -608,7 +608,7 @@
 	and the value of the <varname>kern_securelevel</varname> variable to
 	the desired secure level.</para>
 
-      <para>The default secure level of an &os; system right after the startup
+      <para>The default secure level of a &os; system right after the startup
 	scripts are done is -1.  This is called <quote>insecure mode</quote>
 	because immutable file flags may be turned off, all devices may be
 	read from or written to, and so on.</para>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->jkois 
Responsible-Changed-By: jkois 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Mar 8 09:45:13 UTC 2011 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=155366 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: danger 
State-Changed-When: Tue Mar 8 09:47:25 UTC 2011 
State-Changed-Why:  
- fixed, thanks for submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=155366 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/155366: commit references a PR
Date: Tue,  8 Mar 2011 09:47:21 +0000 (UTC)

 danger      2011-03-08 09:47:13 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml 
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails chapter.sgml 
     en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide article.sgml 
   Log:
   - fix typos
   
   PR:             docs/155366
   Submitted by:   eadler
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.294     +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml
   1.22      +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml
   1.338     +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
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Responsible-Changed-From-To: jkois->danger 
Responsible-Changed-By: jkois 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Mar 8 09:55:49 UTC 2011 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
danger@ committed the fix.  So he should also have this PR in his PR statistics. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=155366 
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