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From: Jason Helfman <jhelfman@experts-exchange.com>
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To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Cc: manolis@freebsd.org, dougb@freebsd.org
Subject: [patch] [maintainer-update] articles/freebsd-update-server: move note tag to important, wording
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>Number:         155357
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] [maintainer-update] articles/freebsd-update-server: move note tag to important, wording
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    manolis
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          maintainer-update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Mar 07 18:20:09 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:    Tue Mar 08 18:42:14 UTC 2011
>Last-Modified:  Tue Mar 08 18:42:14 UTC 2011
>Originator:     Jason Helfman
>Release:        FreeBSD 8.2-RELEASE i386
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>Description:
This needs to stand out more for users building an update server. Move note to "important."

>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

Index: freebsd-update-server/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/jhelfman/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.3 article.sgml
--- freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	24 Feb 2011 17:05:15 -0000	1.3
+++ freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	7 Mar 2011 01:16:17 -0000
@@ -501,15 +501,16 @@
 
 <!-- Sorry folks, but I disagree here. I believe it is worded fine. If anything, drop everything after "perform" and change "updates" to "FreeBSD Updates" and link that to the handbook -->
 
-    <note>
+    <important>
       <para>In order for &fbus.ap; to work properly, updates
 	for both the <emphasis>current</emphasis> release and the
 	release <emphasis>one wants to upgrade to</emphasis> need to be
 	built.  This is necessary for determining the differences of
 	files between releases.  For example, when upgrading a &os;
-	system from version 7.1 to 7.2, updates will need to be built
-	for 7.1-RELEASE as well as for 7.2-RELEASE.</para>
-    </note>
+	system from 7.1-RELEASE to 7.2-RELEASE, updates will need to be 
+	built and uploaded to your distribution server for both versions.
+	</para>
+    </important>
 
     <para>For reference, the entire run of <ulink
 	url="init.txt"><filename>init.sh</filename></ulink> is
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->manolis 
Responsible-Changed-By: manolis 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Mar 7 18:48:10 UTC 2011 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Over to me 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=155357 

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Subject: Re: docs/155357: commit references a PR
Date: Tue,  8 Mar 2011 18:39:43 +0000 (UTC)

 manolis     2011-03-08 18:39:35 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server article.sgml 
   Log:
   Minor update to the freebsd-update server article:
   
   1. Change a <note> to <important>
   2. Minor paragraph rewording
   
   PR:             docs/155357
   Submitted by:   Jason Helfman <jhelfman@experts-exchange.com>
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.4       +4 -4      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: manolis 
State-Changed-When: Tue Mar 8 18:41:48 UTC 2011 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=155357 
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