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From: Sahil Tandon <sahil@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article
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>Number:         154766
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    manolis
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 14 02:10:06 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:    Mon Feb 14 20:46:06 UTC 2011
>Last-Modified:  Mon Feb 14 20:46:06 UTC 2011
>Originator:     Sahil Tandon
>Release:        FreeBSD 9.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

	
>Description:
- Fix two small typos 
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

	



--- freebsd-update-server.diff begins here ---
Index: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	13 Feb 2011 17:53:26 -0000	1.1
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	14 Feb 2011 02:02:53 -0000
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 	url="&url.base;/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/projects/freebsd-update-server/">freebsd-update-server</ulink> software
       is written by &a.cperciva;, current Security Officer of &os;.
       For users that think it is convenient to update their systems
-      against an official update server, building an own &fbus.ap; may
+      against an official update server, building their own &fbus.ap; may
       help to extend its functionality by supporting manually-tweaked
       &os; releases or by providing a local mirror that will allow faster
       updates for a number of machines.</para>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
       It is sourced during all build operations.</para>
 
     <para>Here is the default <filename>build.conf</filename>, which should
-      be modified to suite your own environment.</para>
+      be modified to suit your own environment.</para>
 
     <programlisting>
 
--- freebsd-update-server.diff ends here ---

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From: Jason Helfman <jhelfman@e-e.com>
To: Sahil Tandon <sahil@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org, doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/154766: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article
Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2011 10:59:52 -0800

 Adding a grammatical fix to this, as well. I am okay with this fix.
 
 Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml
 ===================================================================
 RCS file: /home/jhelfman/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml,v
 retrieving revision 1.1
 diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
 --- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	13 Feb 2011 17:53:26 -0000	1.1
 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml	14 Feb 2011 18:53:16 -0000
 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
   	url="&url.base;/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/projects/freebsd-update-server/">freebsd-update-server</ulink> software
         is written by &a.cperciva;, current Security Officer of &os;.
         For users that think it is convenient to update their systems
 -      against an official update server, building an own &fbus.ap; may
 +      against an official update server, building their own &fbus.ap; may
         help to extend its functionality by supporting manually-tweaked
         &os; releases or by providing a local mirror that will allow faster
         updates for a number of machines.</para>
 @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
         It is sourced during all build operations.</para>
   
       <para>Here is the default <filename>build.conf</filename>, which should
 -      be modified to suite your own environment.</para>
 +      be modified to suit your own environment.</para>
   
       <programlisting>
   
 @@ -789,7 +789,7 @@
   	<para>Adding <option>-j <replaceable>NUMBER</replaceable></option>
   	  flags to <maketarget>buildworld</maketarget> and
   	  <maketarget>obj</maketarget> targets in the
 -	  <filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script, may speed up
 +	  <filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script may speed up
   	  processing depending on the hardware used, however it is not
   	  necessary.  Using these flags in other targets is not
   	  recommended, as it may cause the build to become unreliable.</para>
 
 -- 
 Jason Helfman
 System Administrator
 experts-exchange.com
 http://www.experts-exchange.com/M_4830110.html
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Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->manolis 
Responsible-Changed-By: manolis 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Feb 14 20:14:42 UTC 2011 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I will take care of this 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=154766 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: manolis 
State-Changed-When: Mon Feb 14 20:45:43 UTC 2011 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixes committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=154766 
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