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From: Jed Clear <jclear@speakeasy.net>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: top(1) man page formatting error
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>Number:         153614
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] top(1) man page formatting error
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Jan 02 03:20:09 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:    Tue Feb 15 06:34:59 UTC 2011
>Last-Modified:  Tue Feb 15 06:40:14 UTC 2011
>Originator:     Jed Clear
>Release:        8.1R
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD fbsdk6 8.1-RELEASE-p1 FreeBSD 8.1-RELEASE-p1 #3: Sun Oct 17 11:33:39 UTC 2010     root@build32.my.domain:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/K6  i386

>Description:
There is a minor formatting problem in the man page for top(1).  It is noticeable both on my system and http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=top&apropos=0&sektion=0&manpath=FreeBSD+8.1-RELEASE&format=html.  

Specifically in the DESCRIPTION OF MEMORY section, the second line of the example starts "Free Swap:".  The word "Free" belongs at the end of the preceding line.  The second line should start with "Swap:".
>How-To-Repeat:
man top
>Fix:


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Sergey Kandaurov <pluknet@freebsd.org>
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org, jclear@speakeasy.net
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/153614: top(1) man page formatting error
Date: Sun, 2 Jan 2011 19:56:30 +0300

 I'd like to commit the next patch.
 
 Touch up numbers in exemplary information about system memory
 allocation to not wrap the resulting output string on terminal boundary.
 While here, add definition for G and fix indentation for the K definition.
 
 Index: usr.bin/top/top.local.1
 ===================================================================
 --- usr.bin/top/top.local.1     (revision 216594)
 +++ usr.bin/top/top.local.1     (working copy)
 @@ -6,15 +6,18 @@
  At runtime the 'H' key will toggle this mode. The default is OFF.
 
  .SH DESCRIPTION OF MEMORY
 -Mem: 9220K Active, 1032K Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
 +Mem: 9220K Active, 1M Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
  Swap: 91M Total, 79M Free, 13% Inuse, 80K In, 104K Out
 -
 +.TP
  .B K:
  Kilobyte
  .TP
  .B M:
  Megabyte
  .TP
 +.B G:
 +Gigabyte
 +.TP
  .B %:
  1/100
  .TP

From: Alexander Best <arundel@freebsd.org>
To: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/153614: [patch] top(1) man page formatting error
Date: Wed, 5 Jan 2011 02:31:49 +0000

 very nice!
 
 please somebody commit this patch. it fixes two very obvious problems!
 
 cheers.
 alex
 
 -- 
 a13x

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
To: Sergey Kandaurov <pluknet@freebsd.org>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/153614: top(1) man page formatting error
Date: Wed, 05 Jan 2011 11:51:26 +0100

 Yes, please.  Commit this.  It looks fine :-)
 
 On Sun, 2 Jan 2011 17:00:24 GMT, Sergey Kandaurov <pluknet@freebsd.org> wrote:
 > I'd like to commit the next patch.
 >
 > Touch up numbers in exemplary information about system memory
 > allocation to not wrap the resulting output string on terminal boundary.
 > While here, add definition for G and fix indentation for the K definition.
 >
 > Index: usr.bin/top/top.local.1
 > ===================================================================
 > --- usr.bin/top/top.local.1     (revision 216594)
 > +++ usr.bin/top/top.local.1     (working copy)
 > @@ -6,15 +6,18 @@
 >  At runtime the 'H' key will toggle this mode. The default is OFF.
 >
 >  .SH DESCRIPTION OF MEMORY
 > -Mem: 9220K Active, 1032K Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
 > +Mem: 9220K Active, 1M Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
 >  Swap: 91M Total, 79M Free, 13% Inuse, 80K In, 104K Out
 > -
 > +.TP
 >  .B K:
 >  Kilobyte
 >  .TP
 >  .B M:
 >  Megabyte
 >  .TP
 > +.B G:
 > +Gigabyte
 > +.TP
 >  .B %:
 >  1/100
 >  .TP

From: Sergey Kandaurov <pluknet@freebsd.org>
To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/153614: top(1) man page formatting error
Date: Wed, 5 Jan 2011 16:24:26 +0300

 On 5 January 2011 13:51, Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> wrote:
 > Yes, please. =A0Commit this. =A0It looks fine :-)
 >
 
 Hi, Giorgos.
 As I'm currently on vacations I will not be able to check it in until
 after Jan 10.
 I don't object if someone else will do this.
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jan 23 11:09:17 UTC 2011 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed to /head, thanks! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jan 23 11:09:17 UTC 2011 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll MFC this in a few days. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=153614 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/153614: commit references a PR
Date: Sun, 23 Jan 2011 11:08:47 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: keramida (doc committer)
 Date: Sun Jan 23 11:08:39 2011
 New Revision: 217746
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/217746
 
 Log:
   Touch up the sample memory usage numbers a bit, to avoid wrapping
   on terminal boundary.  While here add definition for 'G' and fix
   the indentation of 'K' units.
   
   Submitted by:	plunket
   PR:		docs/153614
   MFC after:	3 days
 
 Modified:
   head/usr.bin/top/top.local.1
 
 Modified: head/usr.bin/top/top.local.1
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/usr.bin/top/top.local.1	Sun Jan 23 11:08:36 2011	(r217745)
 +++ head/usr.bin/top/top.local.1	Sun Jan 23 11:08:39 2011	(r217746)
 @@ -5,16 +5,19 @@
  The '-H' option will toggle the display of kernel visible thread contexts.
  At runtime the 'H' key will toggle this mode. The default is OFF.
  
 -.SH DESCRIPTION OF MEMORY 
 -Mem: 9220K Active, 1032K Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
 +.SH DESCRIPTION OF MEMORY
 +Mem: 9220K Active, 1M Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
  Swap: 91M Total, 79M Free, 13% Inuse, 80K In, 104K Out
 -
 +.TP
  .B K:
  Kilobyte
  .TP
  .B M:
  Megabyte
  .TP
 +.B G:
 +Gigabyte
 +.TP
  .B %:
  1/100
  .TP
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State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Tue Feb 15 06:34:36 UTC 2011 
State-Changed-Why:  
Merged to stable/7 and stable/8. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=153614 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/153614: commit references a PR
Date: Tue, 15 Feb 2011 06:33:43 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: keramida (doc committer)
 Date: Tue Feb 15 06:33:35 2011
 New Revision: 218695
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/218695
 
 Log:
   MFC 217746 from /head/usr.bin/top
   
   Touch up the sample memory usage numbers a bit, to avoid wrapping
   on terminal boundary.  While here add definition for 'G' and fix
   the indentation of 'K' units.
   
   Submitted by:   plunket
   PR:             docs/153614
 
 Modified:
   stable/8/usr.bin/top/top.local.1
 Directory Properties:
   stable/8/usr.bin/top/   (props changed)
 
 Modified: stable/8/usr.bin/top/top.local.1
 ==============================================================================
 --- stable/8/usr.bin/top/top.local.1	Tue Feb 15 05:57:53 2011	(r218694)
 +++ stable/8/usr.bin/top/top.local.1	Tue Feb 15 06:33:35 2011	(r218695)
 @@ -5,16 +5,19 @@
  The '-H' option will toggle the display of kernel visible thread contexts.
  At runtime the 'H' key will toggle this mode. The default is OFF.
  
 -.SH DESCRIPTION OF MEMORY 
 -Mem: 9220K Active, 1032K Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
 +.SH DESCRIPTION OF MEMORY
 +Mem: 9220K Active, 1M Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
  Swap: 91M Total, 79M Free, 13% Inuse, 80K In, 104K Out
 -
 +.TP
  .B K:
  Kilobyte
  .TP
  .B M:
  Megabyte
  .TP
 +.B G:
 +Gigabyte
 +.TP
  .B %:
  1/100
  .TP
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From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/153614: commit references a PR
Date: Tue, 15 Feb 2011 06:34:36 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: keramida (doc committer)
 Date: Tue Feb 15 06:34:30 2011
 New Revision: 218696
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/218696
 
 Log:
   MFC 217746 from /head/usr.bin/top
   
   Touch up the sample memory usage numbers a bit, to avoid wrapping
   on terminal boundary.  While here add definition for ’G’ and fix
   the indentation of ’K’ units.
   
   Submitted by:   plunket
   PR:             docs/153614
 
 Modified:
   stable/7/usr.bin/top/top.local.1
 Directory Properties:
   stable/7/usr.bin/top/   (props changed)
 
 Modified: stable/7/usr.bin/top/top.local.1
 ==============================================================================
 --- stable/7/usr.bin/top/top.local.1	Tue Feb 15 06:33:35 2011	(r218695)
 +++ stable/7/usr.bin/top/top.local.1	Tue Feb 15 06:34:30 2011	(r218696)
 @@ -5,16 +5,19 @@
  The '-H' option will toggle the display of kernel visible thread contexts.
  At runtime the 'H' key will toggle this mode. The default is OFF.
  
 -.SH DESCRIPTION OF MEMORY 
 -Mem: 9220K Active, 1032K Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
 +.SH DESCRIPTION OF MEMORY
 +Mem: 9220K Active, 1M Inact, 3284K Wired, 1M Cache, 2M Buf, 1320K Free
  Swap: 91M Total, 79M Free, 13% Inuse, 80K In, 104K Out
 -
 +.TP
  .B K:
  Kilobyte
  .TP
  .B M:
  Megabyte
  .TP
 +.B G:
 +Gigabyte
 +.TP
  .B %:
  1/100
  .TP
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>Unformatted:
