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From: Yurij <lnkgyv@gmail.com>
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Subject: old data in russian documentation in geom:raid1 mirroring
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>Number:         151401
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       old data in russian documentation in geom:raid1 mirroring
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    taras
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Oct 11 21:30:05 UTC 2010
>Closed-Date:    Mon Nov 22 17:50:14 UTC 2010
>Last-Modified:  Mon Nov 22 17:50:14 UTC 2010
>Originator:     Yurij
>Release:        8.1-RELEASE
>Organization:
ISP Infocom
>Environment:
FreeBSD  8.1-RELEASE FreeBSD 8.1-RELEASE #0: Mon Jul 19 02:55:53 UTC 2010     root@almeida.cse.buffalo.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC  i386
>Description:
Russian translate of handook have old data in section about GEOM: RAID1 - Mirroring. I have made some changes considering original English section of this part of Handbook. My translation Project freebsd.org.ua is dead that I send this changes in PR.
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
I have made patch.

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- chapter.sgml.old	2010-10-11 22:33:35.000000000 +0000
+++ chapter.sgml	2010-10-11 23:55:14.000000000 +0000
@@ -23,6 +23,13 @@
 	<contrib>   : </contrib>
       </author>
     </authorgroup>
+    <authorgroup>
+      <author>
+	<firstname></firstname>
+	<surname></surname>
+	<contrib>: </contrib>
+      </author>
+    </authorgroup>
   </chapterinfo>
 
   <title>GEOM:     </title>
@@ -251,170 +258,181 @@
         (direct access, &man.da.4;)  
       <acronym>SCSI</acronym>.</para>
 
-    <para>   &os;      .
-             swap,   
-      <acronym>RAM</acronym>,       
-        (<filename role="directory">/</filename>).
-              
-      ,        
-         &man.bsdlabel.8;  &man.fdisk.8;,
-               .</para>
-
-    <para>      
-      ,     <username>root</username>.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>  <devicename>/dev/mirror/gm</devicename>  
-         <devicename>/dev/da1</devicename>:</para>
-
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror label -vnb round-robin gm0 /dev/da1</userinput></screen>
-
-    <para>     :</para>
-
-    <screen>
-Metadata value stored on /dev/da1.
-Done.</screen>
-
-    <para> GEOM;     
-      <filename>/boot/kernel/geom_mirror.ko</filename>:</para>
-
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror load</userinput></screen>
-
-    <note>
-      <para>   
-	<devicename>gm0</devicename>, <devicename>gm0s1</devicename>,
-	<devicename>gm0s1a</devicename>  <devicename>gm0s1c</devicename>
-	  <filename role="directory">/dev/mirror</filename>.
-	</para>
-    </note>
-
-    <para>   <command>fdisk</command> 
-          <devicename>gm0</devicename>:</para>
-
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>fdisk -vBI /dev/mirror/gm0</userinput></screen>
-
-    <para>   
-      <command>bsdlabel</command>:</para>
-
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>bsdlabel -wB /dev/mirror/gm0s1</userinput></screen>
-
-    <note>
-      <para>      , 
-	     .    
-	     .
-      </para>
-    </note>
-
-    <para> &man.newfs.8;,     
-       <devicename>gm0s1a</devicename>:</para>
-
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>newfs -U /dev/mirror/gm0s1a</userinput></screen>
-
-    <para>    ,   .
-      ,      ,   
-        <filename role="directory">/mnt</filename>:</para>
-
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount /dev/mirror/gm0s1a /mnt</userinput></screen>
-
-    <para>        
-         .     &man.dump.8; 
-      &man.restore.8;;      &man.dd.1;.</para>
+    <para>,  &os;     
+      <devicename>da0</devicename>. &man.gmirror.8;  ,   
+          .</para>
+    
+    <para>      
+              ,  
+         <varname>kern.geom.debugflags</varname> &man.sysctl.8;
+        :</para>
+
+    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>sysctl kern.geom.debugflags=17</userinput></screen>
+
+    <para>  . Σ     
+         ,    <filename class="devicefile">/dev/mirror/gm</filename>
+       ,   :</para>
 
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dump -L -0 -f- / |(cd /mnt &amp;&amp; restore -r -v -f-)</userinput></screen>
-
-    <para>     .   
-           .</para>
-
-    <para>  <filename>/mnt/etc/fstab</filename>
-        swap 
-      <footnote>
-	<para> ,      
-	     <filename>fstab</filename> ,  ,
-	     -  .
-	    <xref linkend="adding-swap-space">  
-	  .</para>
-      </footnote>.
-           ,   ,
-         :
-
-    <programlisting># Device                Mountpoint      FStype  Options         Dump    Pass#
-#/dev/da0s2b             none            swap    sw              0       0
-/dev/mirror/gm0s1a       /               ufs     rw              1       1</programlisting>
-
-    <para>  <filename>boot.config</filename>  
-      :   .     
-      <acronym>BIOS</acronym>    :</para>
-
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo "1:da(1,a)/boot/loader" &gt; /boot.config</userinput></screen>
+      <warning>
+        <para>      
+              ,        
+            .   ,    
+             &os;.</para>
+      </warning>
 
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo "1:da(1,a)/boot/loader" &gt; /mnt/boot.config</userinput></screen>
+    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror label -vb round-robin gm0 /dev/da0</userinput></screen>
 
-    <note>
-      <para>          ,
-	  -       
-	.           .</para>
-    </note>
+    <para>    :</para>
 
-    <para>   <filename>geom_mirror.ko</filename> 
-       ,   :</para>
+      <screen>Metadata value stored on /dev/da0.
+Done.</screen>
 
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo 'geom_mirror_load="YES"' &gt;&gt; /mnt/boot/loader.conf</userinput></screen>
+<para> GEOM, ޣ   
+	<filename>/boot/kernel/geom_mirror.ko</filename> 
+	:</para>
 
-    <para>:</para>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror load</userinput></screen>
 
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
+      <note>
+	<para>    ,  
+	  <devicename>gm0</devicename>   
+	  <filename class="directory">/dev/mirror</filename>.</para>
+      </note>
 
-    <para>    ,   
-      <devicename>gm0s1a</devicename>.    - ģ  , 
-        <quote> </quote>.
-    </para>
+      <para>  <filename>geom_mirror.ko</filename>
+	    :</para>
 
-    <para>  
-      <devicename>da0</devicename>  
-      <devicename>gm0</devicename>:</para>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo 'geom_mirror_load="YES"' &gt;&gt; /boot/loader.conf</userinput></screen>
 
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror configure -a gm0</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror insert gm0 /dev/da0</userinput></screen>
+      <para>   <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> ,
+	     <devicename>da0</devicename> 
+	  <devicename>gm0</devicename> .</para>
+
+<note>
+	<para> &man.vi.1;    ,  
+	       :</para>
+
+	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>vi /etc/fstab</userinput></screen>
+
+	<para> &man.vi.1;     
+	  <filename>fstab</filename> 
+	  <userinput>:w /etc/fstab.bak</userinput>.  
+	     <devicename>da0</devicename>
+	    <devicename>gm0</devicename> 
+	  <userinput>:%s/da/mirror\/gm/g</userinput>.<para>
+      </note>
 
-    <para> <option>-a</option>    &man.gmirror.8;
-        ,   
-         .    , 
-         ,  , 
-      <devicename>gm0</devicename>   
-      <devicename>data</devicename>.</para>
+      <para>  <filename>fstab</filename>
+	  .       
+	  <acronym>SCSI</acronym>  <acronym>ATA</acronym>,
+	 <acronym>RAID</acronym>  
+	<devicename>gm</devicename> .</para>
+
+      <programlisting># Device                Mountpoint      FStype  Options         Dump    Pass#
+/dev/mirror/gm0s1b     			         none            swap    sw              0       0
+/dev/mirror/gm0s1a              		/               ufs     rw              1       1
+/dev/mirror/gm0s1d				/usr		ufs	rw		0	0
+/dev/mirror/gm0s1f				/home		ufs	rw		2	2
+#/dev/mirror/gm0s2d             		/store          ufs     rw              2       2
+/dev/mirror/gm0s1e              		/var            ufs     rw              2       2
+/dev/acd0               /cdrom          cd9660  ro,noauto       0       0</programlisting>
+
+<para> :</para>
+
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
+
+      <para>    
+	<devicename>gm0</devicename>       
+	<devicename>da0</devicename>.     
+	     <command>mount</command> command:</para>
+
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount</userinput>
+Filesystem         1K-blocks    Used    Avail Capacity  Mounted on
+/dev/mirror/gm0s1a   1012974  224604   707334    24%    /
+devfs                      1       1        0   100%    /dev
+/dev/mirror/gm0s1f  45970182   28596 42263972     0%    /home
+/dev/mirror/gm0s1d   6090094 1348356  4254532    24%    /usr
+/dev/mirror/gm0s1e   3045006 2241420   559986    80%    /var
+devfs                      1       1        0   100%    /var/named/dev</screen>
+
+      <para>   .     
+	   <devicename>da1</devicename>
+	 ,     :</para>
+
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror insert gm0 /dev/da1</userinput></screen>
+
+      <para>       , 
+	 :</para>
+
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror status</userinput></screen>
+
+      <para>   ,   .
+	   :</para>
+
+      <screen>      Name    Status  Components
+mirror/gm0  COMPLETE  da0
+                      da1</screen>
+
+      <para>   ,     
+	    :
+	<literal>DEGRADED</literal> in place of
+	<literal>COMPLETE</literal>.</para>
+    </sect2>
 
-    <sect2>
+<sect2>
       <title> </title>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>  </title>
 
-	<para>      :</para>
+	<para>     :</para>
 
 	<programlisting>ffs_mountroot: can't find rootvp
 Root mount failed: 6
 mountroot></programlisting>
 
-	<para>     
-	<quote>Reset</quote>.       (6).
-	 ģ  ,     &man.loader.8;.
-	   :</para>
+	<para> ,     .
+	      (6).      
+	     &man.loader.8; .    
+           :</para>
 
 	<screen>OK? <userinput>load geom_mirror</userinput>
 OK? <userinput>boot</userinput></screen>
 
-	<para>  ,    - 
-	     .   </para>
+	<para>  ,       .  
+          ,     <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>  .  
+              :</para>
 
 	<programlisting>options	GEOM_MIRROR</programlisting>
 
-	<para>   ,    .
-	     .</para>
+	<para>  ,     .
+	    .</para>
       </sect3>
     </sect2>
-  </sect1>
 
-  <sect1 id="geom-ggate">
+    <sect2>
+      <title>  </title>
+
+      <para>    ,  
+	 ,         .</para>
+
+      <para>     <acronym>RAID</acronym>1
+	 ,   <devicename>da1</devicename>
+	      .   , 
+	       .   
+               Σ   .
+	        :</para>
+
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror forget gm0</userinput></screen>
+
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gmirror insert gm0 /dev/da1</userinput></screen>
+
+      <para>  <command>gmirror</command> <option>status</option>
+	     .    .</para>
+    </sect2>
+  </sect1>
+      
+ <sect1 id="geom-ggate">
     <title>  GEOM Gate</title>
 
     <para>GEOM         


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-bugs->freebsd-doc 
Responsible-Changed-By: pluknet 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Oct 18 12:35:09 UTC 2010 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Move to the proper Responsible category. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=151401 
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->taras 
Responsible-Changed-By: taras 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sat Oct 23 16:02:58 UTC 2010 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll handle this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=151401 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/151401: commit references a PR
Date: Mon, 22 Nov 2010 16:32:13 +0000 (UTC)

 taras       2010-11-22 16:32:08 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml 
     ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/geom chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   MFen:
   - handbook/disks/chapter.sgml   1.297 -> 1.298
   - handbook/geom/chapter.sgml    1.29  -> 1.50 (complete)
   
     Information maximum was extracted from a patch, provided with
   PR: docs/151401
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.29      +2 -2      doc/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml
   1.6       +143 -125  doc/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: taras 
State-Changed-When: Mon Nov 22 17:46:57 UTC 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
Thank you. 

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