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From: Glen Barber <glen.j.barber@gmail.com>
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Subject: [patch][handbook] Chapter 7 Multimedia: Minor grammatical fixes
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>Number:         149790
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch][handbook] Chapter 7 Multimedia: Minor grammatical fixes
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    jkois
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Aug 19 03:00:13 UTC 2010
>Closed-Date:    Fri Aug 20 13:30:32 UTC 2010
>Last-Modified:  Fri Aug 20 13:30:32 UTC 2010
>Originator:     Glen Barber
>Release:        8.1-PRERELEASE
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD orion 8.1-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 8.1-PRERELEASE #3 r210428: Sat Jul 24 13:37:37 EDT 2010     root@orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION  amd64
>Description:
Minor grammatical fixes for the Multimedia chapter.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml.orig	2009-09-29 11:06:13.000000000 -0400
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml	2010-08-18 22:42:49.312202902 -0400
@@ -28,10 +28,10 @@
       effects, and control attached MIDI devices.</para>
 
     <para>With some experimentation, &os; can support
-      playback of video files and DVD's.  The number of applications
+      playback of video files and DVDs.  The number of applications
       to encode, convert, and playback various video media is more
       limited than the number of sound applications.  For example as
-      of this writing, there is no good re-encoding application in the
+      of this writing, there are no good re-encoding applications in the
       FreeBSD Ports Collection that could be used to convert
       between formats, as there is with <filename
       role="package">audio/sox</filename>.  However, the software
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>How to playback DVD's, <filename>.mpg</filename> and
+        <para>How to playback DVDs, <filename>.mpg</filename> and
           <filename>.avi</filename> files.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -1185,7 +1185,7 @@
      usable, but a bit clumsy.</para>
 
     <para>As of this writing, there is no input module shipped with
-     <application>xine</application> which will play CSS encoded DVD's.  There are third party
+     <application>xine</application> which will play CSS encoded DVDs.  There are third party
      builds which do have modules for this built in them, but none
      of these are in the FreeBSD Ports Collection.</para>
 


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->jkois 
Responsible-Changed-By: jkois 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Aug 19 08:59:05 UTC 2010 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take this one. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=149790 

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Subject: Re: docs/149790: commit references a PR
Date: Thu, 19 Aug 2010 19:50:50 +0000 (UTC)

 jkois       2010-08-19 19:50:41 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   PR:     docs/149790
   
   Fix a couple of typos in the multimedia chapter of the handbook.
   
   Patch provided by:      Glen Barber (glen dott j dott barber ett gmail dott com)
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.136     +4 -4      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: jkois 
State-Changed-When: Fri Aug 20 13:29:45 UTC 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
Proposed changes to the documentation are online.  Close this PR. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=149790 
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