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From: Ildar Hizbulin <hizel@vyborg.ru>
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Subject: incorrect translation of an article about ntp
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>Number:         149522
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Russian network article: incorrect translation about ntp
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       handbook
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Aug 11 12:00:17 UTC 2010
>Closed-Date:    Mon Dec 05 14:39:57 UTC 2011
>Last-Modified:  Mon Dec 05 14:39:57 UTC 2011
>Originator:     Ildar Hizbulin
>Release:        7.3-RELEASE-p2
>Organization:
Ariadna-Link, ISP
>Environment:
FreeBSD atv.vyborg.ru 7.3-RELEASE-p2 FreeBSD 7.3-RELEASE-p2 #3: Wed Aug 11 11:43:42 MSD 2010     root@atv.vyborg.ru:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ATV  i386
>Description:
in http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/network-ntp.html#AEN39226

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


>Release-Note:
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From: Maxim Konovalov <maxim.konovalov@gmail.com>
To: Ildar Hizbulin <hizel@vyborg.ru>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: docs/149522
Date: Wed, 1 Sep 2010 12:45:24 +0400 (MSD)

 Hello,
 
 It looks like you missed a word "instead" in the English version of
 the document:
 
 "If you only want to allow machines within your own network to
 synchronize their clocks with your server, but ensure they are not
 allowed to configure the server or used as peers to synchronize
 against, add
 
 restrict 192.168.1.0 mask 255.255.255.0 nomodify notrap
 
 instead [...]"
 ^^^^^^^
 
 So, the translation is correct.
 
 Can I close the PR?
 
 -- 
 Maxim Konovalov
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: taras 
State-Changed-When: Mon Dec 5 14:37:39 UTC 2011 
State-Changed-Why:  
The translation is correct.  It is not so obvious due to different position 
of insertion of listing (<programlisting></programlisting>) within that 
sentence (<para></para>) when comparing EN & RU texts. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=149522 
>Unformatted:
 >If you only want to allow machines within your own network to synchronize their clocks with your server, but ensure they are not allowed to configure the server or used as peers to synchronize against, add
 
 but in russian version
 
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 translated as:
 If you only want to allow machines within your own network to synchronize their clocks with your server, but ensure they are not allowed to configure the server or used as peers to synchronize against, instead of this, add
 
 this is not right!
