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From: Glen Barber <glen.j.barber@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] ng_atm(4): Minor typographical error
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>Number:         148681
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] ng_atm(4): Minor typographical error
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    brueffer
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jul 16 13:10:04 UTC 2010
>Closed-Date:    Sun Aug 22 22:23:15 CEST 2010
>Last-Modified:  Sun Aug 22 22:23:15 CEST 2010
>Originator:     Glen Barber
>Release:        8.1-PRERELEASE
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD orion 8.1-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 8.1-PRERELEASE #2 r209399: Mon Jun 21 20:36:54 EDT 2010     root@orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION  amd64
>Description:
Minor typographical error in ng_atm(4):

 - change 'an' to 'and'
 - add comma

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

Index: share/man/man4/ng_atm.4
===================================================================
--- share/man/man4/ng_atm.4	(revision 210165)
+++ share/man/man4/ng_atm.4	(working copy)
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
 .Xr netgraph 4
 as long as the name does not collide with one of the three predefined names.
 .Pp
-To initiate packet sending an receiving on a dynamic hook one has to issue
+To initiate packet sending and receiving on a dynamic hook, one has to issue
 a
 .Dv NGM_ATM_CPCS_INIT
 control message.


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Sun Aug 15 23:34:59 CEST 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-By: brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Aug 15 23:34:59 CEST 2010 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
MFC reminder. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=148681 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/148681: commit references a PR
Date: Sun, 15 Aug 2010 21:35:10 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: brueffer
 Date: Sun Aug 15 21:34:50 2010
 New Revision: 211355
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/211355
 
 Log:
   Fixed a typo and added a comma.
   
   PR:		148681
   Submitted by:	Glen Barber <glen.j.barber@gmail.com>
   MFC after:	1 week
 
 Modified:
   head/share/man/man4/ng_atm.4
 
 Modified: head/share/man/man4/ng_atm.4
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/share/man/man4/ng_atm.4	Sun Aug 15 21:29:03 2010	(r211354)
 +++ head/share/man/man4/ng_atm.4	Sun Aug 15 21:34:50 2010	(r211355)
 @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ Hooks for dynamically initiated VCIs can
  .Xr netgraph 4
  as long as the name does not collide with one of the three predefined names.
  .Pp
 -To initiate packet sending an receiving on a dynamic hook one has to issue
 +To initiate packet sending and receiving on a dynamic hook, one has to issue
  a
  .Dv NGM_ATM_CPCS_INIT
  control message.
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State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Sun Aug 22 22:23:00 CEST 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
MFCs done. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=148681 
>Unformatted:
