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From: Hywel Mallett <hywel@hmallett.co.uk>
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Subject: [patch] iscsi_initiator.4 man page formatting and syntax changes
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>Number:         145251
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] iscsi_initiator.4 man page formatting and syntax changes
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    brueffer
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Mar 31 22:50:01 UTC 2010
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jul 25 22:08:31 CEST 2010
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jul 25 22:08:31 CEST 2010
>Originator:     Hywel Mallett
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.3-RELEASE amd64
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD xxx 7.3-RELEASE FreeBSD 7.3-RELEASE #0: Tue Mar 3
0 01:09:52 BST 2010 hywel@xxx:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC amd64
>Description:
iscsi_initiator man pages has a few formatting, syntax and spelling errors.
>How-To-Repeat:
man iscsi_initiator
>Fix:
Patch from CURRENT attached

Patch attached with submission follows:

diff -u -r current/src/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4 patched/src/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4
--- current/src/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4        2010-03-12 10:01:06.000000000 +0000
+++ patched/src/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4        2010-03-30 22:42:45.000000000 +0100
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 The
 .Nm
 implements the kernel side of the Internet SCSI (iSCSI) network
-protocol standard, the user land companion is
+protocol standard, the userland companion is
 .Xr iscontrol 8 ,
 and permits access to remote
 .Em virtual
@@ -66,16 +66,16 @@
 .It Va net.iscsi.sessions
 the number of current active sessions.
 .It Va net.iscsi.n.targetname
-is the targe name of session
+the target name of session
 .Em n .
 .It Va net.iscsi.n.targeaddress
-is the IP address of the target of session
+the IP address of the target of session
 .Em n .
 .It Va net.iscsi.n.stats
-are some statistics for session
-.Em n
+statistics for session
+.Em n .
 .It Va net.iscsi.n.pid
-is the
+the
 .Em "process id"
 of the userland side of session
 .Em n ,


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-bugs->freebsd-doc 
Responsible-Changed-By: linimon 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Apr 1 01:22:06 UTC 2010 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
reclassify. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=145251 
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Sun May 9 23:34:14 CEST 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed together with some more changes, thanks! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-By: brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun May 9 23:34:14 CEST 2010 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
MFC reminder. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=145251 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/145251: commit references a PR
Date: Sun,  9 May 2010 21:34:14 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: brueffer
 Date: Sun May  9 21:34:05 2010
 New Revision: 207829
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207829
 
 Log:
   Various wording, spelling and markup fixes.
   
   PR:		145251
   Submitted by:	Hywel Mallett <hywel@hmallett.co.uk> (partly)
   MFC after:	3 week
 
 Modified:
   head/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4
 
 Modified: head/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4	Sun May  9 20:32:00 2010	(r207828)
 +++ head/share/man/man4/iscsi_initiator.4	Sun May  9 21:34:05 2010	(r207829)
 @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
  .\"
  .\" $FreeBSD$
  .\"
 -.Dd February 23, 2007
 +.Dd May 9, 2010
  .Dt ISCSI_INITIATOR 4
  .Os
  .Sh NAME
 @@ -48,34 +48,39 @@ iscsi_initiator_load="YES"
  The
  .Nm
  implements the kernel side of the Internet SCSI (iSCSI) network
 -protocol standard, the user land companion is
 +protocol standard.
 +The userland companion is
  .Xr iscontrol 8 ,
  and permits access to remote
  .Em virtual
  SCSI devices via
  .Xr cam 4 .
  .Sh SYSCTL VARIABLES
 -.Bl -tag -width ".Va net.iscsi.n.targeaddress"
 +.Bl -tag -width "net.iscsi.n.targedaddress"
  .It Va debug.iscsi_initiator
  set the debug-level, 0 means no debugging, 9 for maximum.
  .It Va net.iscsi.isid
  the initiator part of the Session Identifier.
 -.It "the following are informative only:"
 +.El
 +.Pp
 +The following are informative only:
 +.Pp
 +.Bl -tag -width "net.iscsi.n.targedaddress"
  .It Va net.iscsi.driver_version
  the current version of the driver.
  .It Va net.iscsi.sessions
  the number of current active sessions.
  .It Va net.iscsi.n.targetname
 -is the targe name of session
 +the target name of session
  .Em n .
 -.It Va net.iscsi.n.targeaddress
 -is the IP address of the target of session
 +.It Va net.iscsi.n.targedaddress
 +the IP address of the target of session
  .Em n .
  .It Va net.iscsi.n.stats
 -are some statistics for session
 +statistics for session
  .Em n
  .It Va net.iscsi.n.pid
 -is the 
 +the 
  .Em "process id"
  of the userland side of session
  .Em n ,
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State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 25 22:08:15 CEST 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
MFCs done. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=145251 
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