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From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] mtree.8 man page errors
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>Number:         143454
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] mtree.8 man page errors
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    brueffer
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 01 21:20:00 UTC 2010
>Closed-Date:    Sun May 23 22:20:53 CEST 2010
>Last-Modified:  Sun May 23 22:20:53 CEST 2010
>Originator:     Warren Block
>Release:        8-STABLE
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD lightning 8.0-STABLE FreeBSD 8.0-STABLE #0: Sun Jan 31 11:43:29 MST 2010     root@lightning:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/LIGHTNING  i386
>Description:
Missing words and confused tenses in the mtree(8) man page.
>How-To-Repeat:
man 8 mtree
>Fix:
Patch attached.  Beyond this, someone more familiar with mtree could improve this man page by adding a simple example of creating a spec and comparing it.

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- mtree.8.orig	2010-02-01 13:25:32.000000000 -0700
+++ mtree.8	2010-02-01 14:07:30.000000000 -0700
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
 specification.
 .It Fl i
 Indent the output 4 spaces each time a directory level is descended when
-create a specification with the
+creating a specification with the
 .Fl c
 option.
 This does not affect either the /set statements or the comment before each
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
 except a status of 2 is returned if the file hierarchy did not match
 the specification.
 .It Fl w
-Make some errorconditions non-fatal warnings.
+Make some error conditions non-fatal warnings.
 .It Fl x
 Do not descend below mount points in the file hierarchy.
 .It Fl f Ar file
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
 .Pp
 If this option is specified twice, the two specifications are compared
 to each other rather than to the file hierarchy.
-The specifications be sorted like output generated using
+The specifications will be sorted like output generated using
 .Fl c .
 The output format in this case is somewhat remniscent of
 .Xr comm 1 ,


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Fri May 14 03:45:09 CEST 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-By: brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri May 14 03:45:09 CEST 2010 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
MFC reminder. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=143454 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/143454: commit references a PR
Date: Fri, 14 May 2010 01:45:17 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: brueffer
 Date: Fri May 14 01:45:05 2010
 New Revision: 208056
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/208056
 
 Log:
   Wording fixes.
   
   PR:		143454
   Submitted by:	Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
   MFC after:	3 days
 
 Modified:
   head/usr.sbin/mtree/mtree.8
 
 Modified: head/usr.sbin/mtree/mtree.8
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/usr.sbin/mtree/mtree.8	Fri May 14 01:43:13 2010	(r208055)
 +++ head/usr.sbin/mtree/mtree.8	Fri May 14 01:45:05 2010	(r208056)
 @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ Do not complain about files that are in 
  specification.
  .It Fl i
  Indent the output 4 spaces each time a directory level is descended when
 -create a specification with the
 +creating a specification with the
  .Fl c
  option.
  This does not affect either the /set statements or the comment before each
 @@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ instead of from the standard input.
  .Pp
  If this option is specified twice, the two specifications are compared
  to each other rather than to the file hierarchy.
 -The specifications be sorted like output generated using
 +The specifications will be sorted like output generated using
  .Fl c .
  The output format in this case is somewhat remniscent of
  .Xr comm 1 ,
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State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Sun May 23 22:20:11 CEST 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
MFCs done. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=143454 
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