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From: Jason Helfman <jhelfman@e-e.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: add xorg-minimal as alternative for X11 Distribution installation
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>Number:         140703
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] add xorg-minimal as alternative for X11 Distribution installation
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Nov 19 18:50:02 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jul 11 16:20:50 UTC 2010
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jul 11 16:30:09 UTC 2010
>Originator:     Jason Helfman
>Release:        7.2-RELEASE
>Organization:
Experts Exchange
>Environment:
FreeBSD eggman.experts-exchange.com 7.2-RELEASE-p4 FreeBSD 7.2-RELEASE-p4 #0: Fri Oct  2 12:21:39 UTC 2009     root@i386-builder.daemonology.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC  i386
>Description:
add xorg-minimal as alternative for X11 Distribution installation

-suggestion per maintainer of port

Attempted to fix this particular portion of document per standards I believe I met.
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml.orig	2009-11-19 10:33:01.000000000 -0800
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml	2009-11-19 10:42:19.000000000 -0800
@@ -339,11 +339,18 @@
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add -r xorg</userinput></screen>
 
-    <note><para>The examples above will install the complete
+    <note>
+      <para>The examples above will install the complete
       X11 distribution including the
       servers, clients, fonts etc.  Separate packages and ports of X11
-      are also
-      available.</para></note>
+      are also available.</para>
+
+      <para>To install an minimal X11 distribution you can 
+      alternatively install <filename role="package">x11/xorg-minimal
+      </filename></para>.
+    </note>
+
+</note>
 
     <para>The rest of this chapter will explain how to configure
       X11, and how to set up a productive desktop


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
To: Jason Helfman <jhelfman@e-e.com>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/140703: add xorg-minimal as alternative for X11
 Distribution installation
Date: Thu, 19 Nov 2009 20:26:20 +0100

 On Thu, Nov 19, 2009 at 06:46:35PM +0000, Jason Helfman wrote:
 > 
 > >Description:
 > add xorg-minimal as alternative for X11 Distribution installation
 > 
 > -suggestion per maintainer of port
 > 
 > Attempted to fix this particular portion of document per standards I believe I met.
 
 [...]
 
 Hello,
 
 Most of time we avoid to mix content and whitespace changes.
 
 > 
 > --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml.orig	2009-11-19 10:33:01.000000000 -0800
 > +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml	2009-11-19 10:42:19.000000000 -0800
 > @@ -339,11 +339,18 @@
 >  
 >      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add -r xorg</userinput></screen>
 >  
 > -    <note><para>The examples above will install the complete
 > +    <note>
 > +      <para>The examples above will install the complete
 >        X11 distribution including the
 >        servers, clients, fonts etc.  Separate packages and ports of X11
 > -      are also
 > -      available.</para></note>
 > +      are also available.</para>
 
 All above are whitespace/wrapping/layout changes.
 
 > +
 > +      <para>To install an minimal X11 distribution you can 
 > +      alternatively install <filename role="package">x11/xorg-minimal
 > +      </filename></para>.
 
 	the closing </filename> should directly follow x11/xorg-minimal,
 	i.e., <filename role="package">x11/xorg-minimal</filename>.
 	You can break the tags like this:
 
 	blahblahblah blah blahblahblahblahblahblah <filename
 	role="package">x11/xorg-minimal</filename>
 
 	but not like:
 
 	blahblahblah blahblahblah <filename role="package">x11/xorg-minimal
 	</filename>
 
 
 -- 
 Marc

From: Jason Helfman <jhelfman@e-e.com>
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org, jhelfman@e-e.com
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/140703: add xorg-minimal as alternative for X11 Distribution
 installation
Date: Thu, 19 Nov 2009 11:28:14 -0800

 That should be "a minimal..." not "an minimal..."
 
 -jgh
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: bcr 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 11 16:17:40 UTC 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
A modified version of your original patch was committed.  
Thanks for your contribution. PR closed. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=140703 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/140703: commit references a PR
Date: Sun, 11 Jul 2010 16:18:46 +0000 (UTC)

 bcr         2010-07-11 16:15:45 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11 chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   Add a short paragraph about the x11/xorg-minimal package as
   an alternative to the complete X11 distribution.
   
   PR:             docs/140703
   Submitted by:   Jason Helfman (jhelfman at e dash e dot com)
   OK'ed by:       blackend@
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.202     +5 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml
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