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Date: Fri, 13 Nov 2009 01:02:56 GMT
From: Martin Baumann <fefo@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Maybe mistake in description of networks in documentation
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>Number:         140520
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Maybe mistake in description of networks in checkpoint article
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Nov 13 01:10:00 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:    Fri Nov 13 08:52:34 UTC 2009
>Last-Modified:  Fri Nov 13 09:00:05 UTC 2009
>Originator:     Martin Baumann
>Release:        FreeBSD8-RC2
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
Here 
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/articles/checkpoint/article.html

Chapter 1 - Prerequisites
On the picture there are protected network and internal network the same.
I think they shouldn't be. That internal network I think should be: 192.168.10.0/24




Thats all I've found right now.
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
Change internal network to: 192.168.10.0/24


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: roam 
State-Changed-When: Fri Nov 13 08:51:44 UTC 2009 
State-Changed-Why:  
I corrected the image as per your description.  Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=140520 

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Subject: Re: docs/140520: commit references a PR
Date: Fri, 13 Nov 2009 08:51:23 +0000 (UTC)

 roam        2009-11-13 08:51:10 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     share/images/articles/checkpoint networks.pic 
   Log:
   Correct the address space of the internal network in the Checkpoint article.
   
   PR:             140520
   Submitted by:   Martin Baumann <fefo@gmail.com>
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.2       +1 -1      doc/share/images/articles/checkpoint/networks.pic
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