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Subject: [PATCH] Grammatical error in Handbook
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>Number:         139101
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Grammatical error in Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    danger
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Sep 24 08:40:01 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:    Thu Sep 24 15:30:42 UTC 2009
>Last-Modified:  Thu Sep 24 15:40:03 UTC 2009
>Originator:     Denny Lin
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.2-RELEASE-p3 amd64
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD cnmc32.hs.ntnu.edu.tw 7.2-RELEASE-p3 FreeBSD 7.2-RELEASE-p3 #0: Mon Aug 10 17:02:08 CST 2009 root@cnmc32.hs.ntnu.edu.tw:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CNMC32 amd64


	
>Description:
Replace "Lets" with "Let's".
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
See patch.

	

--- disks.patch begins here ---
--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml.orig	2009-09-23 22:33:36.000000000 +0800
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml	2009-09-23 22:33:44.000000000 +0800
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@
       <secondary>adding</secondary>
     </indexterm>
 
-    <para>Lets say we want to add a new SCSI disk to a machine that
+    <para>Let's say we want to add a new SCSI disk to a machine that
       currently only has a single drive.  First turn off the computer
       and install the drive in the computer following the instructions
       of the computer, controller, and drive manufacturer.  Due to the
--- disks.patch ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->danger 
Responsible-Changed-By: danger 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Sep 24 15:26:02 UTC 2009 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=139101 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: danger 
State-Changed-When: Thu Sep 24 15:30:13 UTC 2009 
State-Changed-Why:  
I have fixed the problem by rewording the sentence. 
Thank you for your submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=139101 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
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Subject: Re: docs/139101: commit references a PR
Date: Thu, 24 Sep 2009 15:30:19 +0000 (UTC)

 danger      2009-09-24 15:30:11 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   - reword to avoid a grammar mistak and contraction
   
   PR:     139101
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.292     +2 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml
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>Unformatted:
