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From: Glen Barber <glen.j.barber@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] Remove broken link from developers handbook
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>Number:         136681
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Remove broken link from developers handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Jul 12 10:20:01 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:    Mon Jul 13 07:38:03 UTC 2009
>Last-Modified:  Mon Jul 13 07:40:01 UTC 2009
>Originator:     Glen Barber
>Release:        8.0-BETA1
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD orion 8.0-BETA1 FreeBSD 8.0-BETA1 #8 r195597: Fri Jul 10 20:28:13 EDT 2009     root@orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION  i386
>Description:
The attached patch removes a broken link [1] in the Acknowledgments section (11.15) of the developers handbook [2].

[1] - http://user.nj.net/~tms/hello.html

[2] - http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/x86-acknowledgements.html




>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

--- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/x86/chapter.sgml.orig	2009-07-12 06:04:26.000000000 -0400
+++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/x86/chapter.sgml	2009-07-12 06:04:57.000000000 -0400
@@ -6463,14 +6463,6 @@
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Thomas M. Sommers opened the door for me. His
-<ulink url="http://user.nj.net/~tms/hello.html">How
-do I write "Hello, world" in FreeBSD assembler?</ulink>
-web page was my first encounter with an example of
-assembly language programming under FreeBSD.
-</para>
-
-<para>
 Jake Burkholder has kept the door open by willingly
 answering all of my questions and supplying me with
 example assembly language source code.


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 13 07:37:15 UTC 2009 
State-Changed-Why:  
Insted of just removing the link, just provide a working one 
(http://www.codebreakers-journal.com/content/view/262/27/). 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=136681 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/136681: commit references a PR
Date: Mon, 13 Jul 2009 07:37:20 +0000 (UTC)

 blackend    2009-07-13 07:37:11 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/x86 chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   Fix broken link.
   
   Spotted by:     Glen Barber <glen.j.barber@gmail.com>
   PR:             docs/136681
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.17      +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/x86/chapter.sgml
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