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From: "Alan R. S. Bueno" <alan.bsd@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: make.1 fixes: punctuation, typos, tweaks
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>Number:         135165
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] make(1) fixes: punctuation, typos, tweaks
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    brueffer
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Jun 01 22:40:00 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jul 04 20:49:36 CEST 2010
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jul 04 20:49:36 CEST 2010
>Originator:     Alan R. S. Bueno
>Release:        
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
Fixes:

. Missing full stop.
. Upper case the first character of an description.
. Section headings do not need to be quoted. From OpenBSD's make.1, revision 1.81.
. Plural of suffix is suffixes. From OpenBSD's make.1, revision 1.61.
. s/seperating/separating/.
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
Apply the patch.

Patch attached with submission follows:

Index: make.1
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/src/usr.bin/make/make.1,v
retrieving revision 1.117
diff -u -r1.117 make.1
--- make.1	7 Apr 2009 19:49:38 -0000	1.117
+++ make.1	1 Jun 2009 22:03:45 -0000
@@ -960,7 +960,7 @@
 is the substring of
 .Ar old_string
 to be replaced in
-.Ar new_string
+.Ar new_string .
 .It Cm T
 Replaces each word in the variable with its last component.
 .It Cm U
@@ -1108,7 +1108,7 @@
 may be any one of the following:
 .Bl -tag -width "Cm XX"
 .It Cm ||
-logical
+Logical
 .Tn OR
 .It Cm &&
 Logical
@@ -1298,7 +1298,7 @@
 Loops are not being
 detected and targets that form loops will be silently ignored.
 .El
-.Sh "SPECIAL TARGETS"
+.Sh SPECIAL TARGETS
 Special targets may not be included with other targets, i.e., they must be
 the only target specified.
 .Bl -tag -width Ic
@@ -1590,7 +1590,7 @@
 .It Ic .SUFFIXES
 Each source specifies a suffix to
 .Nm .
-If no sources are specified, any previous specified suffices are deleted.
+If no sources are specified, any previous specified suffixes are deleted.
 .It Ic .WARN
 Each source specifies a warning flag as previously described for the
 .Fl x
@@ -1603,7 +1603,7 @@
 line will influence all sub-makes.
 Several flags can be specified on a single
 .Ic .WARN
-target by seperating them with blanks.
+target by separating them with blanks.
 .El
 .Sh REMAKING MAKEFILES
 If the special target
@@ -1748,7 +1748,7 @@
 .Ar expression
 in a test is very simple-minded.
 Currently, the only form that works is
-.Ql .if ${VAR} op something
+.Ql .if ${VAR} op something .
 For instance, you should write tests as
 .Ql .if ${VAR} == "string"
 not the other way around, which would give you an error.


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Wed May 12 04:00:17 CEST 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-By: brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed May 12 04:00:17 CEST 2010 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
MFC reminder. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=135165 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/135165: commit references a PR
Date: Wed, 12 May 2010 02:00:25 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: brueffer
 Date: Wed May 12 02:00:11 2010
 New Revision: 207948
 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207948
 
 Log:
   - Missing full stops
   - Upper case the first character of an description
   - Section headings do not need to be quoted. From OpenBSD's make.1, revision 1.81
   - Plural of suffix is suffixes. From OpenBSD's make.1, revision 1.61
   - s/seperating/separating/
   
   PR:		135165
   Submitted by:	Alan R. S. Bueno <alan.bsd@gmail.com>
   MFC after:	1 week
 
 Modified:
   head/usr.bin/make/make.1
 
 Modified: head/usr.bin/make/make.1
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/usr.bin/make/make.1	Wed May 12 01:33:51 2010	(r207947)
 +++ head/usr.bin/make/make.1	Wed May 12 02:00:11 2010	(r207948)
 @@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ Otherwise
  is the substring of
  .Ar old_string
  to be replaced in
 -.Ar new_string
 +.Ar new_string .
  .It Cm :T
  Replaces each word in the variable with its last component.
  .It Cm :U
 @@ -1138,7 +1138,7 @@ The
  may be any one of the following:
  .Bl -tag -width "Cm XX"
  .It Cm ||
 -logical
 +Logical
  .Tn OR
  .It Cm &&
  Logical
 @@ -1328,7 +1328,7 @@ made before the sources that succeed it 
  Loops are not being
  detected and targets that form loops will be silently ignored.
  .El
 -.Sh "SPECIAL TARGETS"
 +.Sh SPECIAL TARGETS
  Special targets may not be included with other targets, i.e., they must be
  the only target specified.
  .Bl -tag -width Ic
 @@ -1620,7 +1620,7 @@ command in the file.
  .It Ic .SUFFIXES
  Each source specifies a suffix to
  .Nm .
 -If no sources are specified, any previous specified suffices are deleted.
 +If no sources are specified, any previous specified suffixes are deleted.
  .It Ic .WARN
  Each source specifies a warning flag as previously described for the
  .Fl x
 @@ -1633,7 +1633,7 @@ environment variables so that a warning 
  line will influence all sub-makes.
  Several flags can be specified on a single
  .Ic .WARN
 -target by seperating them with blanks.
 +target by separating them with blanks.
  .El
  .Sh REMAKING MAKEFILES
  If the special target
 @@ -1779,7 +1779,7 @@ The evaluation of
  .Ar expression
  in a test is very simple-minded.
  Currently, the only form that works is
 -.Ql .if ${VAR} op something
 +.Ql .if ${VAR} op something .
  For instance, you should write tests as
  .Ql .if ${VAR} == "string"
  not the other way around, which would give you an error.
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State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 4 20:49:21 CEST 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
MFCs done. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=135165 
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