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From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@doc.bsdgroup.de>
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Subject: "there many" sentence introduced in Rev. 1.1020 of the FAQ
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>Number:         134393
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       "there many" sentence introduced in Rev. 1.1020 of the FAQ
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    jkois
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat May 09 16:00:06 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:    Sat May 09 17:33:21 UTC 2009
>Last-Modified:  Sat May 09 17:33:21 UTC 2009
>Originator:     Benedict Reuschling
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.2-STABLE
>Organization:
The FreeBSD German Documentation Project
>Environment:
FreeBSD atlantis.reuschling.org 7.2-STABLE FreeBSD 7.2-STABLE #19: Mon May  4 20:19:52 CEST 2009     root@atlantis.reuschling.org:/tank/obj/usr/src/sys/ATLANTIS  i386
>Description:
Rev. 1.1020 introduced a "many" in a sentence where the word "is" seems more appropriate. 
>How-To-Repeat:
Search the FAQ document (book.sgml) for the string "there many". 
>Fix:
Apply the attached patch that restores the sentence to its original meaning.

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- book.sgml.old	2009-05-09 17:47:29.311859078 +0200
+++ book.sgml	2009-05-09 17:47:49.680922744 +0200
@@ -9687,7 +9687,7 @@
 	    above.</para>
 
 	  <para>Unfortunately, &macos; does not provide an interface for
-	    changing TCP/IP settings.  However, there many commercial
+	    changing TCP/IP settings.  However, there is commercial
 	    software available that will allow users to customize TCP/IP
 	    settings.  &macos; NAT users should search for their MTU
 	    settings and enter <literal>1450</literal> instead of


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->jkois 
Responsible-Changed-By: jkois 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sat May 9 16:45:42 UTC 2009 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I will take this one. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=134393 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
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Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/134393: commit references a PR
Date: Sat,  9 May 2009 17:28:14 +0000 (UTC)

 jkois       2009-05-09 17:28:05 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml 
   Log:
   PR:     docs/134393
   
   Correct a sentence which is not correct English at the moment.
   
   Found by:       Benedict Reuschling (benedict ett reuschling dott org)
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.1115    +2 -2      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: jkois 
State-Changed-When: Sat May 9 17:30:02 UTC 2009 
State-Changed-Why:  
I made the proposed change to the FAQ. Close the PR.   


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=134393 
>Unformatted:
