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From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@doc.bsdgroup.de>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Superfluous "the" in the FAQ document
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>Number:         133345
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Superfluous "the" in the FAQ document
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Apr 03 17:20:01 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:    Fri Apr 03 17:36:29 UTC 2009
>Last-Modified:  Fri Apr  3 17:40:06 UTC 2009
>Originator:     Benedict Reuschling
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.1-RELEASE
>Organization:
The FreeBSD German Documentation Project
>Environment:
FreeBSD atlantis.reuschling.org 7.1-RELEASE FreeBSD 7.1-RELEASE #15: Sun Jan  4 14:30:56 CET 2009     root@atlantis.reuschling.org:/tank/obj/usr/src/sys/ATLANTIS  i386
>Description:
In revision 1.956 of the FAQ, a superfluous "the" was left which does not belong there.
This was discovered while translating the FAQ for The FreeBSD German Documentation Project.
>How-To-Repeat:
Compare the previous revision 1.955 with 1.956 where the bug crept in.

https://doc.bsdgroup.de/cgi-bin/cvsweb.cgi/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml.diff?r1=1.955;r2=1.956;cvsroot=FreeBSD;f=h
>Fix:
Search the FAQ's book.sgml for the string "the it" and remove superfluous "the" to correct the sentence. See the attached patch file.

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- book.old	2009-04-03 19:04:41.304571102 +0200
+++ book.sgml	2009-04-03 19:05:35.168739872 +0200
@@ -6456,7 +6456,7 @@
 	  <para>To remove <application>Kerberos</application> from the
 	    system, reinstall the <literal>base</literal> distribution
 	    for the release you are running.  If you have the CD-ROM,
-	    you can mount the it (we will assume on <filename
+	    you can mount it (we will assume on <filename
 	      class="directory">/cdrom</filename>) and run the commands
 	    below:</para>
 


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Fri Apr 3 17:36:12 UTC 2009 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed.  Thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=133345 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
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Subject: Re: docs/133345: commit references a PR
Date: Fri,  3 Apr 2009 17:35:53 +0000 (UTC)

 blackend    2009-04-03 17:35:43 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml 
   Log:
   Remove a superfluous "the".
   
   PR:             docs/133345
   Submitted by:   Benedict Reuschling <bcr@doc.bsdgroup.de>
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.1112    +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
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