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From: Dmitry Marakasov <amdmi3@FreeBSD.org>
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>Number:         129723
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] fix 5 typos
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Dec 17 22:30:02 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Thu Dec 18 09:34:54 UTC 2008
>Last-Modified:  Thu Dec 18 09:40:04 UTC 2008
>Originator:     Dmitry Marakasov
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.0-RELEASE-p1 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD hades.panopticon 7.0-RELEASE-p1 FreeBSD 7.0-RELEASE-p1 #1: Wed Jun 25 15:36:22 MSD 2008 root@hades.panopticon:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HADES i386


>Description:
Fix 2 typos in English docs and 3 typos in Russian.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- doc.patch begins here ---
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/amdmi3/projects/freebsd/FreeBSD.cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.417
diff -u -r1.417 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	12 Dec 2008 06:06:03 -0000	1.417
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	17 Dec 2008 21:47:27 -0000
@@ -1719,7 +1719,7 @@
       <para>IBSS mode, also called ad-hoc mode, is designed for point
 	to point connections.  For example, to establish an ad-hoc
 	network between the machine <hostid>A</hostid> and the machine
-	<hostid>B</hostid> we will just need to choose two IP adresses
+	<hostid>B</hostid> we will just need to choose two IP addresses
 	and a SSID.</para>
 
       <para>On the box <hostid>A</hostid>:</para>
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/amdmi3/projects/freebsd/FreeBSD.cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.110
diff -u -r1.110 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml	4 Dec 2008 15:21:04 -0000	1.110
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml	17 Dec 2008 21:47:47 -0000
@@ -4175,7 +4175,7 @@
             <filename role="package">www/mod_perl</filename> and a
             statically compiled version is available in
             <filename role="package">www/apache13-modperl</filename>.
-            <application>mod_perl</application> 2.0 is avaliable in
+            <application>mod_perl</application> 2.0 is available in
             <filename role="package">www/mod_perl2</filename>.</para>
         </sect3>
 
Index: ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/multi-os/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/amdmi3/projects/freebsd/FreeBSD.cvs/doc/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/multi-os/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
--- ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/multi-os/article.sgml	10 Jun 2005 08:26:32 -0000	1.1
+++ ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/multi-os/article.sgml	17 Dec 2008 22:17:45 -0000
@@ -654,7 +654,7 @@
 	    MBR (0 , 0 , 2 ).    
 	   sysinstall     
 	       ,  FreeBSD 
-	  ,       ( ,
+	  ,       ( ,
 	         ).  ,
 	       , 
 	    ,    
Index: ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/amdmi3/projects/freebsd/FreeBSD.cvs/doc/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.2 chapter.sgml
--- ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.sgml	6 May 2005 18:56:15 -0000	1.2
+++ ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.sgml	17 Dec 2008 22:15:40 -0000
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
            .</para>
 
   <para> ,      -  
-     ,      .  
+     ,      .  
           .</para>
 
   <tip>
Index: ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/amdmi3/projects/freebsd/FreeBSD.cvs/doc/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.25
diff -u -r1.25 book.sgml
--- ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml	20 Oct 2006 09:24:16 -0000	1.25
+++ ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml	17 Dec 2008 22:13:18 -0000
@@ -7078,7 +7078,7 @@
             </row>
 
             <row>
-              <entry>5.1-CURRENT a   lockfunc  lockfuncarg
+              <entry>5.1-CURRENT    lockfunc  lockfuncarg
                  &man.bus.dma.tag.create.9;.</entry>
 
               <entry>501102</entry>
--- doc.patch ends here ---

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: maxim 
State-Changed-When: Thu Dec 18 09:34:38 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed.  Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=129723 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/129723: commit references a PR
Date: Thu, 18 Dec 2008 09:31:04 +0000 (UTC)

 maxim       2008-12-18 09:30:50 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/multi-os article.sgml 
     ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/fdp-primer/tools chapter.sgml 
     ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/porters-handbook book.sgml 
   Log:
   o Fix typos.
   
   PR:             docs/129723 (a part of)
   Submitted by:   Dmitry Marakasov
   Obtained from:  FreeBSD Russian Doc Project
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.2       +1 -1      doc/ru_RU.KOI8-R/articles/multi-os/article.sgml
   1.3       +1 -1      doc/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/fdp-primer/tools/chapter.sgml
   1.26      +1 -1      doc/ru_RU.KOI8-R/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml
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From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/129723: commit references a PR
Date: Thu, 18 Dec 2008 09:34:36 +0000 (UTC)

 maxim       2008-12-18 09:34:23 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking 
                                                        chapter.sgml 
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   o Grammar.
   
   PR:             docs/129723
   Submitted by:   amdmi3
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.418     +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
   1.111     +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml
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