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Date: Sat, 4 Oct 2008 01:37:57 GMT
From: Mark Linimon <linimon@FreeBSD.org>
Reply-To: Mark Linimon <linimon@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: [patch] fix entity references in release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.sgml
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>Number:         127840
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] fix entity references in release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.sgml
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    gabor
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Oct 04 01:40:02 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Fri Sep 14 14:59:45 UTC 2012
>Last-Modified:  Fri Sep 14 14:59:45 UTC 2012
>Originator:     Mark Linimon
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.0-STABLE i386
>Organization:
FreeBSD
>Environment:
>Description:
It appears some entity references are misssing the closing semicolon
in the above article.  I do not have the understanding of how to QA
this change.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/FreeBSD/ncvs/src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.314
diff -u -r1.314 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	21 May 2007 18:35:40 -0000	1.314
+++ article.sgml	4 Oct 2008 09:37:51 -0000
@@ -707,7 +707,7 @@
 
     &hwlist.tl;
 
-    <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386, &arch.pc98;] SMC 83c17x (EPIC)-based Ethernet NICs (&man.tx.4; driver)
+    <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;] SMC 83c17x (EPIC)-based Ethernet NICs (&man.tx.4; driver)
     </para>
 
     &hwlist.txp;
@@ -737,23 +737,23 @@
 
   <sect2 id="fddi">
     <title>FDDI Interfaces</title>
-    <para>[&arch.i386, &arch.pc98;] DEC DEFPA PCI (&man.fpa.4; driver)</para>
+    <para>[&arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;] DEC DEFPA PCI (&man.fpa.4; driver)</para>
     <para>[&arch.i386;] DEC DEFEA EISA (&man.fpa.4; driver)</para>
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 id="atm">
     <title>ATM Interfaces</title>
 
-    <para>[&arch.i386, &arch.pc98;] Midway-based ATM interfaces (&man.en.4;
+    <para>[&arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;] Midway-based ATM interfaces (&man.en.4;
       driver)</para>
 
-    <para>[&arch.i386, &arch.pc98; &arch.sparc64;] FORE Systems, Inc. PCA-200E ATM PCI
+    <para>[&arch.i386;, &arch.pc98; &arch.sparc64;] FORE Systems, Inc. PCA-200E ATM PCI
       Adapters (hfa and &man.fatm.4; drivers)</para>
 
     <para>[&arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;] IDT NICStAR 77201/211-based ATM Adapters (&man.idt.4;
     driver)</para>
 
-    <para>[&arch.i386, &arch.pc98; &arch.sparc64;] FORE Systems, Inc. HE155 and HE622
+    <para>[&arch.i386;, &arch.pc98; &arch.sparc64;] FORE Systems, Inc. HE155 and HE622
       ATM interfaces (&man.hatm.4; driver)</para>
 
     <para>[&arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;] IDT77252-based ATM cards (&man.patm.4;
@@ -952,7 +952,7 @@
     <para>[&arch.i386;] DigiBoard intelligent serial cards (digi driver)
     </para>
 
-    <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386, &arch.ia64;] PCI-Based multi-port serial boards (&man.puc.4;
+    <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.ia64;] PCI-Based multi-port serial boards (&man.puc.4;
     driver)
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
@@ -1216,7 +1216,7 @@
     </para>
     <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.ia64;, &arch.pc98;] Keyboards (&man.ukbd.4; driver)
     </para>
-    <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386, &arch.pc98;] Miscellaneous
+    <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;] Miscellaneous
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
 	  <para>Assist Computer Systems PC Camera C-M1</para>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->murray 
Responsible-Changed-By: murray 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Dec 17 03:20:16 UTC 2008 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Will build test this patch and submit to head after I get another 
pending change in. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=127840 
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: murray 
State-Changed-When: Wed Dec 17 04:15:53 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
Thanks Mark.  The patch doesn't apply directly to head but I added the 
missing ';' in all cases there and added a few mising ','s that should 
separate the elements of each architecture list for each 
feature/driver. 

To test this kind of patch, just install the 
textproc/docproj-nojadetex port, check out doc from cvs at the same 
level of the directory hierarchy where this 'src' branch is checked 
out, then cd to src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware and type 
'make'. 

Send any questions to doc@ or me personally and we'll help you get a 
doc setup working where you can test this if you want.  Also the doc 
tools are installed on freefall so you can build docs there if you 
have everything checked out there. 

Or just send patches like this.  that works too. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=127840 
State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: gabor 
State-Changed-When: Fri Sep 14 14:58:40 UTC 2012 
State-Changed-Why:  
With XML we don't have this problem any more since leaving 
out the semicolon breaks the build so it cannot remain 
unnoticed.  Thanks for the submission! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: murray->gabor 
Responsible-Changed-By: gabor 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Sep 14 14:58:40 UTC 2012 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Track. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=127840 
>Unformatted:
