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Date: Mon, 1 Sep 2008 18:41:22 GMT
From: Eitan Adler <eitan.adler+fbsd@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: update to fbsd handbook
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>Number:         127027
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       update to fbsd handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    manolis
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Sep 01 18:50:01 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Wed Sep 03 15:52:02 UTC 2008
>Last-Modified:  Wed Sep 03 15:52:02 UTC 2008
>Originator:     Eitan Adler
>Release:        -
>Organization:
>Environment:
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>Description:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/arch-handbook/boot-kernel.html 
"To where exactly is the execution passed by the loader, i.e. what is the kernel's actual entry point. Let us take a look at the command that links the kernel:"
should read 
"In order to see where the kernel is actually loaded you need to examine the command that links the kernel"  or something to that extent.  The current text is barely proper English.
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Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->manolis 
Responsible-Changed-By: manolis 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Sep 1 20:04:56 UTC 2008 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Assign to me 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=127027 

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Subject: Re: docs/127027: commit references a PR
Date: Wed,  3 Sep 2008 15:46:08 +0000 (UTC)

 manolis     2008-09-03 15:45:54 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   Reword a paragraph to more proper English
   
   PR:             docs/127027
   Submitted by:   Eitan Adler <eitan.adler+fbsd@gmail.com>
   Approved by:    gabor (mentor)
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.27      +4 -3      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.sgml
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: manolis 
State-Changed-When: Wed Sep 3 15:51:17 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
This is now fixed. Thanks for your submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=127027 
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