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From: Fabian Keil <fk@fabiankeil.de>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [PATCH] Spelling and grammar fixes for snd_emu10kx(4) man page
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>Number:         125223
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Spelling and grammar fixes for snd_emu10kx(4) man page
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    danger
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Jul 03 15:10:01 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jul 06 11:10:00 UTC 2008
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jul  6 11:10:01 UTC 2008
>Originator:     Fabian Keil
>Release:        CURRENT
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD TP51.local 8.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 8.0-CURRENT #25: Fri Jun 27 17:43:17 CEST 2008     fk@TP51.local:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/THINKPAD  i386
>Description:
The attached patch contains spelling and
grammar fixes for the snd_emu10kx(4) man page.
>How-To-Repeat:
man snd_emu10kx
>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

--- .zfs/snapshot/2008-07-02/share/man/man4/snd_emu10kx.4	2008-05-29 23:32:37.160637269 +0200
+++ share/man/man4/snd_emu10kx.4	2008-07-02 15:16:02.452314893 +0200
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@
 the sound subsystem does not support such an amount of PCM channels.
 This device can not be opened for read, thus confusing many applications.
 .Pp
-Within a multichannel stream , thefirst half (0-15 or 0-31) is a copy of all DSP
+Within a multichannel stream, the first half (0-15 or 0-31) is a copy of all DSP
 outputs, the second half (15-30 or 32-63) is a copy of some DSP inputs.
 On Live! cards the last substream (31) is used as a sync stream and is always
 set to 0xc0de.
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@
 It controls only front output
 volume in multichannel mode and all output volume in single channel mode.
 .It Qq rec
-mixer control acts very different on EMU10K1 and other cards.
+mixer control acts very differently on EMU10K1 and other cards.
 On EMU10K1 cards it controls the AC97 codec recording level.
 On non-EMU10K1 cards it controls the amount of AC97
 .Dq stereo mix


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->danger 
Responsible-Changed-By: danger 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Jul 3 15:55:35 UTC 2008 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=125223 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/125223: commit references a PR
Date: Thu,  3 Jul 2008 16:48:59 +0000 (UTC)

 danger      2008-07-03 16:48:35 UTC
 
   FreeBSD src repository
 
   Modified files:
     share/man/man4       snd_emu10kx.4 
   Log:
   SVN rev 180221 on 2008-07-03 16:48:35Z by danger
   
   - fix typos
   
   PR:             docs/125223
   Submitted by:   Fabian Keil <fk (a) fabiankeil.de>
   MFC after:      3 days
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.7       +2 -2      src/share/man/man4/snd_emu10kx.4
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State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: danger 
State-Changed-When: Thu Jul 3 16:51:42 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
I have commited your patch, will take care of MFC. 
Thank you for your submission. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=125223 
State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: danger 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 6 11:09:19 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
I have synced snd_emu10kx.4 with -HEAD. Close this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=125223 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
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Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/125223: commit references a PR
Date: Sun,  6 Jul 2008 11:09:16 +0000 (UTC)

 danger      2008-07-06 11:08:50 UTC
 
   FreeBSD src repository
 
   Modified files:        (Branch: RELENG_7)
     share/man/man4       snd_emu10kx.4 
   Log:
   SVN rev 180322 on 2008-07-06 11:08:50Z by danger
   
   MFC r179371 and r180221 [1]:
   
   - various mdoc a spelling fixes
   - typo fixes [1]
   
   PR:             docs/125223 [1]
   Submitted by:   Fabian Keil <fk (a) fabiankeil.de> [1]
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.5.2.1   +33 -27    src/share/man/man4/snd_emu10kx.4
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