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From: "Gabor PALI" <pgj@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: [patch] Fix Markups in FAQ, Question 3.27
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>Number:         123975
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Fix Markups in FAQ, Question 3.27
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    gabor
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun May 25 10:50:02 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Sun May 25 14:43:50 UTC 2008
>Last-Modified:  Sun May 25 14:43:50 UTC 2008
>Originator:     Gabor PALI
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD disznohal 6.3-STABLE FreeBSD 6.3-STABLE #4: Fri Apr 4 23:29:43 CEST 2008 dezzy@disznohal:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC_ i386

>Description:
	I found that some embedded <screen> tags in the FreeBSD FAQ,
	Question 3.27. ``Installation crashes while booting, what can
	I do?''. I think they should be unfolded and separated into
	different paragraphs.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- books.faq.patch.12.diff begins here ---
Index: book.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.811
diff -u -r1.811 book.sgml
--- book.sgml	12 Apr 2008 20:13:12 -0000	1.811
+++ book.sgml	25 May 2008 08:28:06 -0000
@@ -2077,9 +2077,17 @@
 
 	<answer>
 	  <para>Try disabling ACPI support.  When the bootloader loads, press
-	    the space key.  The system displays <screen>OK</screen>.  Type
-	    <screen><userinput>unset acpi_load</userinput></screen> and then
-	    <screen><userinput>boot</userinput></screen>.</para>
+	    the space key.  The system will display the following:</para>
+
+	  <screen>OK</screen>
+
+	  <para>Type:</para>
+
+	  <screen><userinput>unset acpi_load</userinput></screen>
+
+	  <para>And then type:</para>
+
+	  <screen><userinput>boot</userinput></screen>
 	</answer>
       </qandaentry>
 
--- books.faq.patch.12.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->gabor 
Responsible-Changed-By: gabor 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun May 25 11:01:03 UTC 2008 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=123975 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
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Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/123975: commit references a PR
Date: Sun, 25 May 2008 14:39:15 +0000 (UTC)

 gabor       2008-05-25 14:39:11 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml 
   Log:
   - Reformat a part with some embedded screen elements to avoid the possible
     rendering issues, which can come this way
   
   PR:             docs/123975
   Submitted by:   pgj
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.820     +11 -3     doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: gabor 
State-Changed-When: Sun May 25 14:41:48 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=123975 
>Unformatted:
