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Subject: [patch] Replace Old-Style Replaceables with <replaceable> Markups in Handbook Chapter 25
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>Number:         123473
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Replace Old-Style Replaceables with <replaceable> Markups in Handbook Chapter 25
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    gabor
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue May 06 18:20:01 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Wed May 07 15:12:55 UTC 2008
>Last-Modified:  Wed May 07 15:12:55 UTC 2008
>Originator:     Gabor PALI
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD disznohal 6.3-STABLE FreeBSD 6.3-STABLE #4: Fri Apr 4 23:29:43 CEST 2008 dezzy@disznohal:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC_ i386

>Description:
	I found some old fashioned replaceables (enclosed by &gt; and
	&lt; entities) in the FreeBSD Handbook, Chapter 25 (``PPP and
	SLIP''). I think they should be replaced with <replaceable>
	markups, so I created a patch to implement this.


>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- ppp-and-slip.patch.3.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.177
diff -u -r1.177 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	3 Feb 2008 23:12:02 -0000	1.177
+++ chapter.sgml	6 May 2008 04:09:11 -0000
@@ -1324,10 +1324,10 @@
 passive         # wait for LCP packets
 domain ppp.foo.com      # put your domain name here
 
-:&lt;remote_ip&gt;    # put the IP of remote PPP host here
+:<replaceable>remote_ip</replaceable>    # put the IP of remote PPP host here
                 # it will be used to route packets via PPP link
                 # if you didn't specified the noipdefault option
-                # change this line to &lt;local_ip&gt;:&lt;remote_ip&gt;
+                # change this line to <replaceable>local_ip</replaceable>:<replaceable>remote_ip</replaceable>
 
 defaultroute    # put this if you want that PPP server will be your
                 # default router</programlisting>
@@ -1468,12 +1468,12 @@
 	        # if the remote host doesn't send your IP during
                 # IPCP negotiation, remove this option
 passive         # wait for LCP packets
-domain &lt;your.domain&gt;	# put your domain name here
+domain <replaceable>your.domain</replaceable>	# put your domain name here
 
 :		# put the IP of remote PPP host here
 	        # it will be used to route packets via PPP link
                 # if you didn't specified the noipdefault option
-                # change this line to &lt;local_ip&gt;:&lt;remote_ip&gt;
+                # change this line to <replaceable>local_ip</replaceable>:<replaceable>remote_ip</replaceable>
 
 defaultroute	# put this if you want that PPP server will be
 	        # your default router</programlisting>
@@ -1484,9 +1484,9 @@
 	<para>The following should go on a single line.</para>
       </note>
 
-      <programlisting>ABORT BUSY ABORT 'NO CARRIER' "" AT OK ATDT&lt;phone.number&gt;
-  CONNECT "" TIMEOUT 10 ogin:-\\r-ogin: &lt;login-id&gt;
-  TIMEOUT 5 sword: &lt;password&gt;</programlisting>
+      <programlisting>ABORT BUSY ABORT 'NO CARRIER' "" AT OK ATDT<replaceable>phone.number</replaceable>
+  CONNECT "" TIMEOUT 10 ogin:-\\r-ogin: <replaceable>login-id</replaceable>
+  TIMEOUT 5 sword: <replaceable>password</replaceable></programlisting>
 
       <para>Once these are installed and modified correctly, all you need
 	to do is run <command>pppd</command>, like so:</para>
--- ppp-and-slip.patch.3.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->gabor 
Responsible-Changed-By: gabor 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue May 6 18:42:42 UTC 2008 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=123473 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: gabor 
State-Changed-When: Wed May 7 15:11:26 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=123473 
>Unformatted:
