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From: "Gabor PALI" <pgj@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: [patch] Replace <userinput> Tags with <keycap Tags in Handbook Section 18.3
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>Number:         123333
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Replace <userinput> Tags with <keycap Tags in Handbook Section 18.3
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    gabor
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri May 02 16:20:00 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Mon May 05 22:45:44 UTC 2008
>Last-Modified:  Mon May 05 22:45:44 UTC 2008
>Originator:     Gabor PALI
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD disznohal 6.3-STABLE FreeBSD 6.3-STABLE #4: Fri Apr 4 23:29:43 CEST 2008 dezzy@disznohal:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC_ i386

>Description:
	I found some misused <userinput> tags in the FreeBSD Handbook,
	Section 18.3 (Adding Disks). I created a patch to change them
	to the more convenient <keycap> tags.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- disks.patch.1.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.282
diff -u -r1.282 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	25 Mar 2008 08:43:38 -0000	1.282
+++ chapter.sgml	2 May 2008 16:04:56 -0000
@@ -227,12 +227,12 @@
 
 	<step>
 	  <title><application>fdisk</application> Partition Editor</title>
-	  <para>Once inside <application>fdisk</application>, typing <userinput>A</userinput> will
+	  <para>Once inside <application>fdisk</application>, pressing <keycap>A</keycap> will
 	    use the entire disk for FreeBSD.  When asked if you want to
 	    <quote>remain cooperative with any future possible operating
 	      systems</quote>, answer <literal>YES</literal>.  Write the
-	    changes to the disk using <userinput>W</userinput>.  Now exit the
-	    FDISK editor by typing <userinput>q</userinput>.  Next you will be
+	    changes to the disk using <keycap>W</keycap>.  Now exit the
+	    FDISK editor by pressing <keycap>Q</keycap>.  Next you will be
 	    asked about the <quote>Master Boot Record</quote>.  Since you are adding a
 	    disk to an already running system, choose
 	    <literal>None</literal>.</para>
@@ -262,8 +262,8 @@
 	  <para><application>sysinstall</application>'s Label editor
 	    favors the <literal>e</literal>
 	    partition for non-root, non-swap partitions.  Within the
-	    Label editor, create a single file system by typing
-	    <userinput>C</userinput>.  When prompted if this will be a FS
+	    Label editor, create a single file system by pressing
+	    <keycap>C</keycap>.  When prompted if this will be a FS
 	    (file system) or swap, choose <literal>FS</literal> and type in a
 	    mount point (e.g, <filename>/mnt</filename>).  When adding a
 	    disk in post-install mode, <application>sysinstall</application>
@@ -272,8 +272,8 @@
 	    you specify is not important.</para>
 
 	  <para>You are now ready to write the new label to the disk and
-	    create a file system on it.  Do this by typing
-	    <userinput>W</userinput>.  Ignore any errors from
+	    create a file system on it.  Do this by pressing
+	    <keycap>W</keycap>.  Ignore any errors from
 	    <application>sysinstall</application> that
 	    it could not mount the new partition.  Exit the Label Editor
 	    and <application>sysinstall</application> completely.</para>
--- disks.patch.1.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->gabor 
Responsible-Changed-By: gabor 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri May 2 16:26:06 UTC 2008 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=123333 

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Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/123333: commit references a PR
Date: Mon,  5 May 2008 14:04:48 +0000 (UTC)

 gabor       2008-05-05 14:04:31 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   - Use keycap instead of userinput
   
   PR:             docs/123333
   Submitted by:   pgj
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.284     +7 -7      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: gabor 
State-Changed-When: Mon May 5 22:45:12 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=123333 
>Unformatted:
