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From: gregory delfly <gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: handbook: typos
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>Number:         120925
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       handbook: typos
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Feb 21 08:10:01 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Thu Feb 21 10:36:58 UTC 2008
>Last-Modified:  Thu Feb 21 10:40:01 UTC 2008
>Originator:     gregory delfly
>Release:        6.3R
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
In the "printing" chapter of the handbook, I saw one word which might be lacking (proper English asks for "in addition to", imho).
Also, there is a "." inside of a <quote>, which is not the usage (in docs).
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
I made a patch correcting those, which is to be applied to "chapter.smgl" in /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- chapter.sgml.old	2008-02-21 08:51:36.000000000 +0100
+++ chapter.sgml	2008-02-21 08:52:26.000000000 +0100
@@ -2915,7 +2915,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
           <para>Accessing a printer attached directly to a network.  The
-            printer has a network interface in addition (or in place of) a
+            printer has a network interface in addition to (or in place of) a
             more conventional serial or parallel interface.  Such a printer
             might work as follows:</para>
           
@@ -3547,7 +3547,7 @@
             printers.  Like disk quotas, the accounting is immediate. You can
             prevent users from printing when their account goes in the red,
             and might provide a way for users to check and adjust their
-            <quote>print quotas.</quote> But this method requires some database
+            <quote>print quotas</quote>.  But this method requires some database
             code to track users and their quotas.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: remko 
State-Changed-When: Thu Feb 21 10:36:57 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed. Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=120925 

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Subject: Re: docs/120925: commit references a PR
Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2008 10:36:34 +0000 (UTC)

 remko       2008-02-21 10:36:30 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   Fix some typos.
   
   PR:             docs/120925
   Submitted by:   "gregory delfly" <gregoryd dot freebsd at free dot fr>
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.101     +2 -2      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml
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