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From: Marcin Cieslak <saper@SYSTEM.PL>
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Subject: books/arch-handbook/usb/chapter.sgml formatting
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>Number:         119545
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       books/arch-handbook/usb/chapter.sgml formatting
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       serious
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    dru
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       archhandbook
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Jan 10 22:20:02 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Wed Apr 23 14:57:57 UTC 2014
>Last-Modified:  Wed Apr 23 14:57:57 UTC 2014
>Originator:     Marcin Cieslak
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.0-PRERELEASE amd64
>Organization:
>Environment:

System: FreeBSD radziecki.saper.info 7.0-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 7.0-PRERELEASE #7: Sun Jan 6 03:23:21 CET 2008 saper@radziecki.saper.info:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/VAIO amd64


>Description:

The USB chapter of the Architecture Handbook contains some strange markup:

1) Missing reference [ 2] in  "Access to these registers is provided through a virtualised hub 
	as suggested in the USB specification [ 2]" 
2) In the OCHI chapter: typo 
	"to which aqueue of transfer descriptors"
	should probably be "to which a queue ..."

3) In the OHCI chapter:
  <para>framelist interruptisochronous control bulk</para>

Should this be some form of a graph? 

3) In the "Device Information chapter":

     <para>Level 0 Level 1 Level 2 Slot 0</para>
     <para>Slot 3 Slot 2 Slot 1</para>
     <para>(Only 4 out of 32 slots shown)</para>

Another graphing attempt?

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

Difficult to fix (except for 2) without knowing original author's intent.

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->dru 
Responsible-Changed-By: dru 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Apr 23 13:56:06 UTC 2014 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=119545 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: dru 
State-Changed-When: Wed Apr 23 13:56:31 UTC 2014 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed in r44632. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=119545 
>Unformatted:
