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From: gregory delfly <gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: typo in printing/chapter.sgml
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>Number:         119463
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Jan 08 18:00:08 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Mon Jan 14 13:42:46 UTC 2008
>Last-Modified:  Mon Jan 14 13:50:01 UTC 2008
>Originator:     gregory delfly
>Release:        6.3-RC2 on i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
In /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml,
thereis a superfluous ';' after the word "capability" (which I suppose comes from a copy-paste move, since there are other instances of "capability;" before, which are however perfectly relevant) 
>How-To-Repeat:
read it again
>Fix:
see patch attached below

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- chapter.sgml.old	2008-01-06 21:42:36.000000000 +0100
+++ chapter.sgml	2008-01-06 23:31:03.000000000 +0100
@@ -1797,7 +1797,7 @@
               
         <programlisting>:if=/usr/local/libexec/psif:</programlisting>
 
-        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability;
+        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability
           that tells <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in 
 	  read-write mode.</para>
             


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Remko Lodder <remko@FreeBSD.org>
To: gregory delfly <gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/119463: typo in printing/chapter.sgml
Date: Tue, 08 Jan 2008 19:07:59 +0100

 gregory delfly wrote:
 
 Hello,
 
 Thanks for all the PR tickets, it's greatly appreciated, one question / 
 remark from me though; can you please try to bundle the changes to one 
 chapter.sgml into one diff/ticket ? makes it much easier to process and
 it all affects the same file so a bit of overkill ;-)
 
 But again thanks!
 
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Mon Jan 14 13:40:59 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
Hi Gregory, 
I reworded the text of the peragraph a bit, to avoid the need 
for a ';' separating two sub-sentences.  The new text is shown 
below: 

-        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability; 
-          that tells <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in 
-         read-write mode.</para> 
+        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability. 
+         When this capability is present, <application>LPD</application> 
+         opens the printer in read-write mode.</para> 

Does this look better? 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Jan 14 13:40:59 UTC 2008 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll handle this PR, if Gregory wants to make more changes. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=119463 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/119463: commit references a PR
Date: Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:40:23 +0000 (UTC)

 keramida    2008-01-14 13:40:19 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   Reword a bit a part which seemed confusing.  Using shorter sentences
   here is probably better for non-native English speakers (like me).
   
   PR:             docs/119463
   Submitted by:   Gregory Delfly, gregoryd.freebsd at free.fr
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.99      +3 -3      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml
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