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From: gregory delfly <gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: lacking spaces make reading less easy
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>Number:         119460
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [handbook] [patch] lacking spaces make reading less easy
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Jan 08 17:50:01 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:    Mon Jan 14 02:29:22 UTC 2008
>Last-Modified:  Mon Jan 14 02:30:06 UTC 2008
>Originator:     gregory delfly
>Release:        6.3-RC2 on i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
In file /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml
three options out of 6 lack a space between the switch and the argument.
It's not consistent, and especially not cosmetically fine ;-)
>How-To-Repeat:
Read it again...
>Fix:
see patch

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- chapter.sgml.old	2008-01-06 20:49:16.000000000 +0100
+++ chapter.sgml	2008-01-06 20:49:57.000000000 +0100
@@ -1572,9 +1572,9 @@
               <cmdsynopsis>
                 <command>filter-name</command>
                 <arg>-c</arg>
-                <arg choice="plain">-w<replaceable>width</replaceable></arg>
-                <arg choice="plain">-l<replaceable>length</replaceable></arg>
-                <arg choice="plain">-i<replaceable>indent</replaceable></arg>
+                <arg choice="plain">-w <replaceable>width</replaceable></arg>
+                <arg choice="plain">-l <replaceable>length</replaceable></arg>
+                <arg choice="plain">-i <replaceable>indent</replaceable></arg>
                 <arg choice="plain">-n <replaceable>login</replaceable></arg>
                 <arg choice="plain">-h <replaceable>host</replaceable></arg>
                 <arg choice="plain"><replaceable>acct-file</replaceable></arg>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Jan 14 02:19:59 UTC 2008 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take care of that. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=119460 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Mon Jan 14 02:29:06 UTC 2008 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=119460 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/119460: commit references a PR
Date: Mon, 14 Jan 2008 02:28:56 +0000 (UTC)

 keramida    2008-01-14 02:28:51 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   Add a bit of whitespace between option letters and arguments in
   the description of the LPD `input filter' and `output filter',
   to make reading a bit more comfortable and the source more
   consistent with the rest of the option lists.
   
   PR:             docs/119460
   Submitted by:   Gregory Delfly, <gregoryd.freebsd at free.fr
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.98      +2 -2      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml
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>Unformatted:
