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From: gregory delfly <gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: typo in documentation: fdp-primer
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>Number:         119138
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] typo in documentation: fdp-primer
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    danger
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Dec 29 17:50:00 UTC 2007
>Closed-Date:    Sun Dec 30 02:42:23 UTC 2007
>Last-Modified:  Sun Dec 30 02:50:02 UTC 2007
>Originator:     gregory delfly
>Release:        6.3-RC1
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
There is a typo in the fdp-primer, in the chapter sgml-primer. "whereas" is spelled "where as", which is not academic...
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
I join a patch to apply to:
/usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- chapter.sgml.old	2007-12-29 18:35:30.000000000 +0100
+++ chapter.sgml	2007-12-29 18:35:50.000000000 +0100
@@ -986,7 +986,7 @@
 
       <para>Like <link linkend="sgml-primer-general-entities">general
 	  entities</link>, parameter entities are used to assign names to
-	reusable chunks of text.  However, where as general entities can only
+	reusable chunks of text.  However, whereas general entities can only
 	be used within your document, parameter entities can only be used
 	within an <link linkend="sgml-primer-sgml-escape">SGML
 	  context</link>.</para>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: danger 
State-Changed-When: Sun Dec 30 02:40:54 UTC 2007 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed in cvs; it should be visible online after next sheduled 
documentation rebuild. 
Thank you for your submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=119138 
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->danger 
Responsible-Changed-By: danger 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Dec 30 02:42:25 UTC 2007 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Make me responsible for this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=119138 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
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Subject: Re: docs/119138: commit references a PR
Date: Sun, 30 Dec 2007 02:40:37 +0000 (UTC)

 danger      2007-12-30 02:40:32 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   - Spell "whereas" correctly.
   
   PR:             docs/119138
   Submitted by:   gregory delfly <gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr>
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.47      +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml
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