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Subject: readability note in handbook/install chapter
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>Number:         114180
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       readability note in handbook/install chapter
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    murray
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Jul 01 00:30:04 GMT 2007
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jul 01 01:36:14 GMT 2007
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jul 01 01:36:14 GMT 2007
>Originator:     Ben Kaduk
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386


	
>Description:
	The handbook refers to MS-DOS based file systems.  Some of us
know these filesystems as FAT16 and FAT32 -- we should be able to afford
a few more words.
>How-To-Repeat:
	http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-trouble.html
>Fix:

--- chapter.sgml.orig   Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007
+++ chapter.sgml        Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007
@@ -3972,7 +3995,8 @@
        located in the <guimenuitem>Start</guimenuitem>&gt; <guimenuitem>Programs<
/guimenuitem> &gt;
        <guimenuitem>System Tools</guimenuitem> menu.</para>

-      <para>&os; can support &ms-dos; based file systems.  This requires you use
+      <para>&os; can support &ms-dos;-based file systems (FAT16 and FAT32).
+       This requires you use
        the &man.mount.msdosfs.8; command
        with the required parameters.  The utility most common usage is:</para>



>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: murray 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:35:29 UTC 2007 
State-Changed-Why:  
Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml.  Thanks for the submission.  Website will be updated later today. 



Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->murray 
Responsible-Changed-By: murray 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:35:29 UTC 2007 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml.  Thanks for the submission.  Website will be updated later today. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114180 
>Unformatted:
