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Subject: nit in handbook -- install chapter
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>Number:         114174
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       nit in handbook -- install chapter
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Jun 30 23:10:04 GMT 2007
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jul 01 01:33:33 GMT 2007
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jul 01 01:33:33 GMT 2007
>Originator:     Benjamin Kaduk
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386


	
>Description:
	the phrase ``sum up'' is used as a verb, which, though
	common usage may accept, is stylistically inconsistent
	with the rest of the text.
>How-To-Repeat:
	http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-hardware.html
>Fix:

--- chapter.sgml.orig   Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007
+++ chapter.sgml        Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007
@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
       <para>Information about the minimal configuration is
        available in the Installation Notes on the <ulink
        url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html">Release
-       Information</ulink> page of the &os; web site.  A sum up of
+       Information</ulink> page of the &os; web site.  A summary of
        this information is given in the following sections.
        Depending on the method you choose to install &os;, you may
        also need a floppy drive, a supported CDROM drive, and in some


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: murray 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 1 01:32:39 UTC 2007 
State-Changed-Why:  
Submitted in r1.352 of install/chapter.sgml.  Thanks for the submission.  Website will be updated later today. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=114174 
>Unformatted:
