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Date: Thu, 21 Jun 2007 00:30:13 GMT
From: pluknet <pluknet@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] minor grammar in lock.9 locking.9 manpages
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>Number:         113891
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] minor grammar in lock.9 locking.9 manpages
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    brueffer
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Jun 21 00:40:00 GMT 2007
>Closed-Date:    Thu Jun 21 18:45:44 CEST 2007
>Last-Modified:  Thu Jun 21 18:45:44 CEST 2007
>Originator:     pluknet
>Release:        
>Organization:
n/a
>Environment:
7.0-CURRENT from Fri May 11 23:20:54 MSD 2007
>Description:
There are few comma typos in cross references section in locking(9) manpage and
xref dupe in lock(9) .
>How-To-Repeat:
See mentioned manpages.
>Fix:
Apply the patch against src/share/man/man9/ .

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- lock.9.orig	Wed Jun 13 20:23:36 2007
+++ lock.9	Thu Jun 21 03:34:13 2007
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF SUCH
 .\" DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $FreeBSD: src/share/man/man9/lock.9,v 1.16 2007/03/30 18:07:26 julian Exp $
+.\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
 .Dd June 20, 2006
 .Dt LOCK 9
@@ -273,7 +273,6 @@
 will be the result of trying.
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr condvar 9 ,
-.Xr mutex 9 ,
 .Xr locking 9 ,
 .Xr mutex 9 ,
 .Xr rwlock 9 ,
--- locking.9.orig	Wed Jun 13 20:23:41 2007
+++ locking.9	Thu Jun 21 03:34:44 2007
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
 .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.\" $FreeBSD: src/share/man/man9/locking.9,v 1.7 2007/03/19 07:49:11 delphij Exp $
+.\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
 .Dd March 14, 2007
 .Dt LOCKING 9
@@ -280,14 +280,14 @@
 .El
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr condvar 9 ,
-.Xr lock 9
+.Xr lock 9 ,
 .Xr mtx_pool 9 ,
 .Xr rwlock 9 ,
 .Xr sema 9 ,
 .Xr sleep 9 ,
-.Xr sx 9
+.Xr sx 9 ,
 .Xr LOCK_PROFILING 9 ,
-.Xr WITNESS 9 ,
+.Xr WITNESS 9
 .Sh HISTORY
 These
 functions appeared in


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->danger 
Responsible-Changed-By: danger 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Jun 21 16:27:55 UTC 2007 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=113891 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/113891: commit references a PR
Date: Thu, 21 Jun 2007 16:39:38 +0000 (UTC)

 brueffer    2007-06-21 16:39:25 UTC
 
   FreeBSD src repository
 
   Modified files:
     share/man/man9       lock.9 locking.9 
   Log:
   Remove duplicate xref and add missing commas.
   
   PR:             113891
   Submitted by:   pluknet <pluknet@gmail.com>
   Approved by:    re (blanket)
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.17      +0 -1      src/share/man/man9/lock.9
   1.10      +3 -3      src/share/man/man9/locking.9
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Thu Jun 21 18:45:15 CEST 2007 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: danger->brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-By: brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Jun 21 18:45:15 CEST 2007 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=113891 
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