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From: Motomichi Matsuzaki <mzaki@e-mail.ne.jp>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: spell miss (joy.4)
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>Number:         11257
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       fix typo (joy.4)
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    billf
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Apr 21 04:40:00 PDT 1999
>Closed-Date:    Thu May 6 13:52:32 PDT 1999
>Last-Modified:  Thu May  6 13:54:02 PDT 1999
>Originator:     Motomichi Matsuzaki
>Release:        FreeBSD 3.1-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

	

>Description:

	

>How-To-Repeat:

	

>Fix:
	
--- /usr/src/share/man/man4/man4.i386/joy.4	Thu Mar 12 16:30:33 1998
+++ /tmp/joy.4	Wed Apr 21 20:13:26 1999
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 .Pp
 This device may be opened by only one process at a time.
 .Pp
-The joystick status is get in an structure joystick via a read()
+The joystick status is got in a structure joystick via a read()
 call. The structure is defined in the header file as follows:
 .Pp
 .Bd -literal -offset indent


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->analyzed 
State-Changed-By: billf 
State-Changed-When: Wed Apr 21 12:04:40 PDT 1999 
State-Changed-Why:  
I rewrote the sentence. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->billf 
Responsible-Changed-By: billf 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Apr 21 12:04:40 PDT 1999 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll commit/merge the change. 

From: Bill Fumerola <billf@chc-chimes.com>
To: Motomichi Matsuzaki <mzaki@e-mail.ne.jp>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/11257: spell miss (joy.4)
Date: Wed, 21 Apr 1999 10:51:13 -0400 (EDT)

 On Wed, 21 Apr 1999, Motomichi Matsuzaki wrote:
 
 > --- /usr/src/share/man/man4/man4.i386/joy.4	Thu Mar 12 16:30:33 1998
 > +++ /tmp/joy.4	Wed Apr 21 20:13:26 1999
 > @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 >  .Pp
 >  This device may be opened by only one process at a time.
 >  .Pp
 > -The joystick status is get in an structure joystick via a read()
 > +The joystick status is got in a structure joystick via a read()
 >  call. The structure is defined in the header file as follows:
 >  .Pp
 >  .Bd -literal -offset indent
 
 The grammer is still wrong. This should read:
 
 "The joystick status is read from a structure via a read()"
 
 In any event, I'll commit the change.
 
 - bill fumerola - billf@chc-chimes.com - BF1560 - computer horizons corp -
 - ph:(800) 252-2421 - bfumerol@computerhorizons.com - billf@FreeBSD.org  -
 
 
 
 
State-Changed-From-To: analyzed->closed 
State-Changed-By: billf 
State-Changed-When: Thu May 6 13:52:32 PDT 1999 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed in src/share/man/man4/man4.i386/joy.4 
rev1.10(HEAD) 
rev1.9.2.1(RELENG_3) 

Thanks. 
>Unformatted:
