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Date: Fri, 13 Oct 2006 15:06:27 +0100
From: Shaun Amott <shaun@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: [PATCH] Handbook security chapter: minor grammatical fixes
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>Number:         104381
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Handbook security chapter: minor grammatical fixes
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    trhodes
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Oct 13 14:10:16 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Sat Oct 14 02:51:26 GMT 2006
>Last-Modified:  Sat Oct 14 03:00:31 GMT 2006
>Originator:     Shaun Amott
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.2-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

>Description:

The security chapter of the handbook has a few minor grammatical errors.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- security-chapter.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.299
diff -u -r1.299 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	10 Oct 2006 02:43:40 -0000	1.299
+++ chapter.sgml	12 Oct 2006 14:42:19 -0000
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
       servers &mdash; meaning that external entities can connect and talk
       to them.  As yesterday's mini-computers and mainframes become
       today's desktops, and as computers become networked and
-      internetwork, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para>
+      inter-networked, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para>
 
     <para>System security also pertains to dealing with various forms of
       attack, including attacks that attempt to crash, or otherwise make a
@@ -2296,6 +2296,9 @@
   Issued           Expires          Principal
 Aug 27 15:37:58  Aug 28 01:37:58  krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG</screen>
 
+         <para>The ticket can then be revoked when you have finished:</para>
+
+         <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>k5destroy</userinput>
       </sect2>
 
       <sect2>
@@ -2319,7 +2322,7 @@
 	  <application>Kerberos</application> enabled daemons and a
 	  workstation &mdash; the server must have a
 	  <filename>keytab</filename> file.  This file
-	  contains the servers host key, which allows it and the
+	  contains the server's host key, which allows it and the
 	  <acronym>KDC</acronym> to verify each others identity.  It
 	  must be transmitted to the server in a secure fashion, as the
 	  security of the server can be broken if the key is made public.
@@ -2349,8 +2352,8 @@
 	  you can use <command>kadmin</command> from the
 	  <application>Kerberos</application> server.  The
 	  <command>add --random-key</command> command will let you add the
-	  servers host principal, and the <command>ext</command> command
-	  will allow you to extract the servers host principal to its own
+	  server's host principal, and the <command>ext</command> command
+	  will allow you to extract the server's host principal to its own
 	  keytab.  For example:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kadmin</userinput>
--- security-chapter.diff ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Sat Oct 14 02:49:28 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
Slightly different version of your patch committed.  The patch 
you provided failed to apply, malformed.  I also added a closing 
screen tag in the second hunk to keep the build from breaking. 
Thanks for the submission! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-By: trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sat Oct 14 02:49:28 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Over to me. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=104381 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/104381: commit references a PR
Date: Sat, 14 Oct 2006 02:49:20 +0000 (UTC)

 trhodes     2006-10-14 02:49:10 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   Quick grammatical improvements.
   Mention how to use k5destroy.
   
   PR:             104381
   Submitted by:   Shaun Amott (original version)
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.302     +8 -4      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
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>Unformatted:
