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From: Marian Cerny <jojo@matfyz.cz>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Typos in articles/vm-design
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>Number:         103327
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Typos in articles/vm-design
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    danger
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Sep 17 14:30:20 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Sun Sep 24 13:38:04 GMT 2006
>Last-Modified:  Sun Sep 24 13:40:23 GMT 2006
>Originator:     Marian Cerny
>Release:        
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
I have found two typos in Articles > Design elements of the FreeBSD VM system (vm-design).

The first one is in section 2 VM Objects.
There is one extra right parenthesis at the end of the sentence: "The original page in B is now completely hidden since both C1 and C2 have a copy and B could theoretically be destroyed if it does not represent a real file)."

The second one is in section 9 Bonus QA session by Allen Briggs, question 9.5. Finally, in the page coloring section, it might help to have a little more description of what you mean here. I did not quite follow it.
In the sentence "If you access offset 0 in main memory and then offset offset 128K in main memory you can wind up throwing away the cached data you read from offset 0!" there is one extra word offset.
>How-To-Repeat:
Look at

http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/vm-objects.html
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/allen-briggs-qa.html#Q9.5.
>Fix:
Change:

The original page in B is now completely hidden since both C1 and C2 have a copy and B could theoretically be destroyed if it does not represent a real file).

To:

The original page in B is now completely hidden since both C1 and C2 have a copy and B could theoretically be destroyed if it does not represent a real file.

And:

If you access offset 0 in main memory and then offset offset 128K in main memory you can wind up throwing away the cached data you read from offset 0!

To:

If you access offset 0 in main memory and then offset 128K in main memory you can wind up throwing away the cached data you read from offset 0!
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->danger 
Responsible-Changed-By: danger 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Sep 17 16:32:20 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=103327 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: danger 
State-Changed-When: Sun Sep 24 13:37:12 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
I have committed diff which fixed these things. 
Thank you for your submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=103327 

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Subject: Re: docs/103327: commit references a PR
Date: Sun, 24 Sep 2006 13:37:02 +0000 (UTC)

 danger      2006-09-24 13:36:59 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design article.sgml 
   Log:
   Fix typos.
   
   PR: docs/103327
   Approved by: trhodes (mentor), keramida (mentor)
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.16      +2 -2      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/article.sgml
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