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Subject: [PATCH] en_US: Correct handbook/install (update the boot disk information)
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>Number:         100538
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] en_US: Correct handbook/install (update the boot disk information)
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    chinsan
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Jul 19 14:30:17 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Mon Apr 09 08:24:01 GMT 2007
>Last-Modified:  Mon Apr  9 08:30:02 GMT 2007
>Originator:     chinsan
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.1-STABLE i386
>Organization:
FreeBSD Taiwan
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD chinsan2.twbbs.org 6.1-STABLE FreeBSD 6.1-STABLE #1: Fri Jun 2 16:44:35 CST 2006 root@chinsan2.twbbs.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386


	
>Description:
 - Chase the change(Revision 1.332)
   The order of install floppies on 4.X is kern.flp -> mfsroot.flp -> kern.flp
		                    5.X(and later) is boot.flp -> kern1.flp -> kern2.flp -> boot.flp
   After Revision 1.332, as far as i know, we removed some 4.X info 
   but not update all related content.

   This patch will chase the chage.

   ( patch URL  http://chinsan2.twbbs.org/chinsan/en_US.handbook.install.diff )

   Thanks. :)

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

	

--- en_US.handbook.install.diff begins here ---
diff -ruN en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.orig/chapter.sgml en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.orig/chapter.sgml	Wed Jul 19 19:53:44 2006
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml	Wed Jul 19 22:15:24 2006
@@ -792,7 +792,7 @@
 	  <para>If you are booting from floppy disc, you will see a display
 	    similar to this (version information omitted):</para>
 	
-	  <screen>Verifying DMI Pool Data ........ 
+	  <screen>Uncompressing ... done
 
 BTX loader 1.00  BTX version is 1.01 
 Console: internal video/keyboard 
@@ -804,15 +804,12 @@
 
 /kernel text=0x277391 data=0x3268c+0x332a8 |
 
-Please insert MFS root floppy and press enter:</screen>
+Insert disk labelled "Kernel floppy 1" and press any key...</screen>
 
 	  <para>Follow these instructions by removing the
-	    <filename>kern.flp</filename> disc, insert the
-	    <filename>mfsroot.flp</filename> disc, and press
-	    <keycap>Enter</keycap>.  &os;&nbsp;5.3
-	    and above provide other floppy disks set, as described
-	    in <link linkend="install-floppies">previous
-	    section</link>.  Boot from first floppy;
+	    <filename>boot.flp</filename> disc, insert the
+	    <filename>kern1.flp</filename> disc, and press
+	    <keycap>Enter</keycap>.  Boot from first floppy;
 	    when prompted, insert the other disks as required.</para>
 	</step>
 
@@ -847,7 +844,7 @@
 	  <para>If you needed to prepare boot floppies, as described in 
 	    <xref linkend="install-floppies"> then one of them will be the
 	    first boot disc, probably the one containing
-	    <filename>kern.flp</filename>.  Put this disc in your floppy
+	    <filename>boot.flp</filename>.  Put this disc in your floppy
 	    drive and type the following command to boot the disk
 	    (substituting the name of your floppy drive if
 	    necessary):</para>
@@ -866,11 +863,11 @@
 	  <para>FreeBSD will start to boot.  If you are booting from a
 	    floppy disc, at some point you will see the message:</para>
 
-	  <screen>Please insert MFS root floppy and press enter:</screen>
+	  <screen>Insert disk labelled "Kernel floppy 1" and press any key...</screen>
 
 	  <para>Follow these instructions by removing the
-	    <filename>kern.flp</filename> disc, insert the
-	    <filename>mfsroot.flp</filename> disc, and press
+	    <filename>boot.flp</filename> disc, insert the
+	    <filename>kern1.flp</filename> disc, and press
 	    <keycap>Enter</keycap>.</para>
 	</step>
 
--- en_US.handbook.install.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->jcamou  
Responsible-Changed-By: jcamou 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Oct 13 14:22:18 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Grab. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=100538 
Responsible-Changed-From-To: jcamou->chinsan 
Responsible-Changed-By: chinsan 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Apr 8 10:53:59 UTC 2007 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take it. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=100538 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: chinsan 
State-Changed-When: Mon Apr 9 08:23:58 UTC 2007 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed. Thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=100538 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/100538: commit references a PR
Date: Mon,  9 Apr 2007 08:20:33 +0000 (UTC)

 chinsan     2007-04-09 08:20:28 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   - Update the floppy section of installation chapter in Handbook.
   
     NOTE:
     4.X                   5.x and above
     ------------------------------------
     mfsroot.flp           boot.flp
     kern.flp              kern1.flp
                           kern2.flp
   
   PR:             docs/100538
   Submitter:      me
   Approved by:    delphij@ (mentor)
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.347     +8 -12     doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml
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