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From: Aasmund Eikli <inter@o12a.com>
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Subject: Small blurb in explaining-bsd article
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>Number:         100312
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Small blurb in explaining-bsd article
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jul 14 22:00:44 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Sat Jul 15 00:29:03 GMT 2006
>Last-Modified:  Sat Jul 15 00:29:03 GMT 2006
>Originator:     Aasmund Eikli
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.1-RELEASE-p3 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD fbsd.fido.local 6.1-RELEASE-p3 FreeBSD 6.1-RELEASE-p3 #0: Fri Jul 14 02:27:23 CEST 2006 root@fbsd.fido.local:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/INTER i386


>Description:
	I was skimming the explaining-bsd article and it occured to me that in it's points on which OS to use it doesn't mention
	any documentation effort. I included a small addition to the list. 
>How-To-Repeat:
n/a
>Fix:
I suppose this is a test patch to see if I did this right. Sorry if I messed up. 

--- article.sgml.old    Fri Jul 14 23:22:07 2006
+++ article.sgml        Fri Jul 14 23:32:52 2006
@@ -547,6 +547,12 @@
        </listitem>

        <listitem>
+         <para>BSD projects have a large emphasis on good documentation. The various
+           documentation projects aim to provide actively updated documentation in many languages
+           covering all aspects of the individual BSD system.
+       </listitem>
+
+       <listitem>
          <para>The BSD license may be more attractive than the GPL.</para>
        </listitem>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Sat Jul 15 00:24:28 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
I just committed a slightly modified version of the patch. 
The web interface to the CVS repository seems to be temporarily 
misbehaving, so I'm pasting the diff output here: 

%         <listitem> 
% +         <para>BSD projects have a better reputation for the quality and 
% +           completeness of their documentation.. The various documentation 
% +           projects aim to provide actively updated documentation, in many 
% +           languages, and covering all aspects of the system.</para> 
% +       </listitem> 

Wording changes here and there and a missing </para> are the 
changes I made. 

You wrote: 
> I suppose this is a test patch to see if I did this right. Sorry if I 
> messed up. 

You didn't mess up at all.  Thanks for the patch :) 



Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sat Jul 15 00:24:28 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=100312 
>Unformatted:
