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Subject: typos in isdnd.8
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>Number:         10020
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Some typos?! in isdnd.8 manpages in 3.0-19980209-SNAP
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Feb 10 23:50:01 PST 1999
>Closed-Date:    Sun Mar 7 10:38:25 PST 1999
>Last-Modified:  Sun Mar  7 10:40:02 PST 1999
>Originator:     Norihiro Kumagai
>Release:        3.0-19980209-SNAP
>Organization:
FreeBSD Japanese Manual Translate Project (jpman)
>Environment:

	manpages in 3.0-19980209-SNAP

>Description:

	1) In paragraph 3 in "INCOMING CALLS", I have found a strange
	   description:
	   "the kernel signals the then active connection by ..."
	   I guess "the then" might be "the"?!

	2) the description, DISCONNECT_REQ, DISCONNECT_IND should be
	   I4D_DISCONNECT_REQ, MSG_DISCONNECT_IND, respectively, 
	   I guess, because these words represent macro names defined in
	   <machine/i4b_ioctl.h>.

>How-To-Repeat:

	(none)

>Fix:
	Please examine the following patch if it is worth to adopt.

--- isdnd-us.8-org	Thu Feb 11 01:42:44 1999
+++ isdnd-us.8	Thu Feb 11 16:20:55 1999
@@ -277,11 +277,11 @@
 .Pp
 The call is terminated by either the local site timing out or the remote
 side hanging up the connection or the local side actively sending a
-.Em DISCONNECT_REQ
+.Em I4B_DISCONNECT_REQ
 ioctl message, both events are signaled to the
 .Nm
 by the kernel sending the
-.Em DISCONNECT_IND
+.Em MSG_DISCONNECT_IND
 message and the CDID corresponding to the call is no longer valid.
 .Pp
 .Ss INCOMING CALLS
@@ -299,18 +299,18 @@
 .Em I4B_CONNECT_RESP
 ioctl message with the appropriate parameters to the kernel.
 .Pp
-In case the daemon decided to accept the message, the kernel signal the then 
+In case the daemon decided to accept the message, the kernel signal the
 active connection by sending a
 .Em MSG_CONNECT_ACTIVE_IND
 message to the daemon.
 .Pp
 The call is terminated by either the local site timing out or the remote
 side hanging up the connection or the local side actively sending a
-.Em DISCONNECT_REQ
+.Em I4B_DISCONNECT_REQ
 ioctl message, both events are signaled to the
 .Nm
 by the kernel sending the
-.Em DISCONNECT_IND
+.Em MSG_DISCONNECT_IND
 message and the CDID corresponding to the call is no longer valid.
 .Pp
 
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: hm 
State-Changed-When: Sun Mar 7 10:38:25 PST 1999 
State-Changed-Why:  
this has been fixed by the recent upgrade to  recent upgrade to i4b 0.71.00 
>Unformatted:
