Posts by UncleJosh@wandering.shop
 (DIR) Post #AVEAIo6BdOsTCYxhYG by UncleJosh@wandering.shop
       2023-05-02T00:19:09Z
       
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       @grammargirl There's nothing like spending an hour on word choice in a paragraph that gets cut.
       
 (DIR) Post #AY5tP6Hd4p7GKLFcAa by UncleJosh@wandering.shop
       2023-07-26T18:08:18Z
       
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       @grammargirl Thanks for that. I just workshopped a story where most everything was in past tense but one line (in a single paragraph) was in present tense. It made me stop to read it twice. I'm not sure it's a technique I'd use in my fiction for the narrative voice.
       
 (DIR) Post #AYnBcUhgdNQiBLwHdg by UncleJosh@wandering.shop
       2023-08-16T15:25:07Z
       
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       @grammargirl I break out a copy of Ken Rand's Ten Percent Solution and work that process until it loses the voice.