Subj : show goes on
To   : alexander koryagin
From : Roy Witt
Date : Fri Jul 06 2018 22:01:01

alexander koryagin wrote to All:

 ak> Yesterday, at 9pm, without declaring a war, my neighbors bought a
 ak> piano.

Yeah, and? Other than perhaps the comma after Yesterday, I see no problem
with this sentence. Keep in mind that a comma seperates or pauses a
thought, as you have done with Yesterday (pause) at 9pm (pause) without
declaring a war (pause) my neighbors bought a piano (stop)

Comma = pause
Period = stop

 ak> Daddy, I've got two question for you. Can I have more pocket money
 ak> and why not?

Ahhh...an opportunistic child.  Get both questions in before the old man
can think about why not...

 ak> A snowwoman which is made by a boy acquires more and more details
 ak> with every year passing.

A boy who soon becomes a young man and the details are more pronounced as
his mind instructs his physical being to add the minutest details as if
the snowwoman were a real woman.


         R\%/itt


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