Subj : Lovely 3 bedroom apartment..
To   : Denis Mosko
From : August Abolins
Date : Wed Oct 14 2020 16:55:03

On 11/10/2020 2:10 p.m., Denis Mosko : All wrote:



 DM> Lovely 3 bedroom apartment located in City, tourist area
 DM> near River, area SUPERMARKET. All infrastructure and
 DM> amenities are close by. Total covered area of flat is 20,
 DM> fully renovated. Apartment features bedroom, living room
 DM> with open-plan kitchen, bathroom and a shower, balcony,
 DM> River view. Apartment is furnished and washing machine is
 DM> installed throughout. Covered parking.

 DM> Is it ok?

The most glaring problem would be this sentence:

 "Apartment is furnished and washing machine is
 installed throughout."


I'd make it:

"Apartment is fully furnished, including an in-suite washing machine."


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