X-Google-Language: ENGLISH,ASCII X-Google-Thread: f996b,e852db44e2f0563e X-Google-Attributes: gidf996b,public X-Google-ArrivalTime: 2002-07-31 08:21:55 PST Path: archiver1.google.com!news1.google.com!newsfeed.stanford.edu!news.tele.dk!small.news.tele.dk!130.133.1.3!fu-berlin.de!uni-berlin.de!213.242.128.42!not-for-mail From: "Joaquim G�ndara" Newsgroups: alt.ascii-art Subject: Re: Nerd Boy, episode 257 Date: Wed, 31 Jul 2002 17:12:02 +0200 Lines: 53 Message-ID: References: <64nakuose1rtnlj00lg7ojqjscs3janekv@4ax.com> <6isfku0eo8qsdktvcs6o827i2oi4ke501q@4ax.com> NNTP-Posting-Host: 213.242.128.42 X-Trace: fu-berlin.de 1028128419 35922451 213.242.128.42 (16 [102694]) X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-Newsreader: Microsoft Outlook Express 6.00.2600.0000 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2600.0000 Xref: archiver1.google.com alt.ascii-art:18632 "llizard" skrev i meddelandet news:6isfku0eo8qsdktvcs6o827i2oi4ke501q@4ax.com > In article , "Joaquim > G�ndara" wrote: > >"llizard" skrev i meddelandet > >news:tnjdkug18ummleua0tbjbq8enln625msu2@4ax.com > >> In article , "Joaquim > >> G�ndara" wrote: > >> >"llizard" skrev i meddelandet > >> >news:da9bkussva7cpq7qr9410a7v0hre6k0p9t@4ax.com 8< > >> The extraneous *point* *laugh* detracts from Nerdboy's "OK, don't > >> answer that", which is the punchline (at least I thought that was the > >> punchline) > > > >A weak punchline, which I wanted to combine with a postpunchline joke, > >Calvin & Hobbes style. > > The punchline isn't weak. The postpunchline joke would work better if > it didn't have the extra words to distract the eye. The "extra words" _are_ the postpunchline joke. > But I sense that you have tired of my ceaseless nagging on this. From > now on, I will try to confine my comments on your strips that I find > funny to "oh wow that was fabulous" and perhaps attempt to say why I > think it works. You can question my writing any time you want, but this discussion just seems to go back and forth... > And speaking of #258, is there a reason that it is only on > http://nerdboy.xepher.net/ and not on http://nerdboy.port5.com/ ? Yes, I couldn't get through to the port5 server yesterday. > ____ > /| OO| > | |.||| ,^^%--- the only reason I've made suggestions > |_|_bb| _/>\ \ is that I see something quite good > --- == > \ that with a few tweaks could be great > [_____] __>,^ > ejm | | //| | Subjectively speaking, of course, since I see something rather OK that with your tweaks would become worse... In this case, anyway. -- OO Joaquim G�ndara | Official Nerd Boy site: .||. | http://nerdboy.port5.com (UK) bb jg | http://nerdboy.xepher.net (US)