X-Google-Language: ENGLISH,ASCII-7-bit X-Google-Thread: f996b,87d54f53173eaff5 X-Google-Attributes: gidf996b,public X-Google-ArrivalTime: 2001-06-30 19:33:27 PST Path: archiver1.google.com!newsfeed.google.com!newsfeed.stanford.edu!sn-xit-01!sn-post-01!supernews.com!corp.supernews.com!not-for-mail From: "LGB" Newsgroups: alt.ascii-art Subject: Re: pic "nude" feline Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2001 21:30:48 -0500 Organization: Posted via Supernews, http://www.supernews.com Message-ID: References: <9hkq5v$3ee$1@taliesin.netcom.net.uk> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-Newsreader: Microsoft Outlook Express 5.50.4522.1200 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V5.50.4522.1200 X-Complaints-To: newsabuse@supernews.com Lines: 98 Xref: archiver1.google.com alt.ascii-art:6462 "Dave Bird" wrote in message news:B1ECo4COOiP7EwPH@xemu.demon.co.uk... > In article<9hkq5v$3ee$1@taliesin.netcom.net.uk>, Joel > writes: > >Its supposed to be censored but still good job :) > > > It's a good nude figure, but the head is problematic. The attempt to > make the eyes round does not really work out; nor does the degree > of emphasis on the two small folds down from nose to lip. Her hair > is wrong too in "simply" hovering all round the head undifferentiated: > it looks as if she has a bushy beard as well as head hair. True maybe should have took a differant look at it, a standing stretch an not a laying back stretch. The arm drape over her head was the mian concern as it short on the rise an long over the hair --snip a bunch -- > How about this revision? Like what you did works very well. Played with it some more one very sutle change in her hip line 32 colunm 27 brought in 1 space. The face i think turn out great. Shifted it all to the right 1 space really help out on the arm problem. Standing is better than laying back on the stretch. Looks better in Courier New 8 > >> > >> _-``:``--..__ > >> -_._-{_.._ `--._ > >> .``._-:;;;`-._ `--._ > >> .:::::::((;;;;;;`. `-._ > >> .`::(;;;;/;;;;;;;;;;`-. `-. > >> .:(:::;(_;;'' '';;;;;`-. \ > >> .:;(:::/;; ... .. .;;:::\ | > >> .;;(:;(:;; / \ .;:::.( / > >> `;;;;;;;;;. : : .::::.) | > >> ,:;(.;(;;(;:. -.^.- . .::;:/ / > >> .;;;((;;;;;;.`-"-' .;;;:: | > >> .`;;;((.'`.,`:'----';;;;;.` / > >> .;;((.` `.`;;, .:;;;: | > >> .:;((.' (:::;'..;;;;;` / > >> .(;:.' /.::;;;;;; ( > >> .(:.' /;.;;;;; ` `. > >> .:;/ /;.;;; . \ > >> .;;./ |;;;. / . . 3} > >>';;;/ /;. | (v; | ' : > >> / / /| \ -` . `.__.` > >> / : / \ `. .` / > >> ( .` | `- -` | > >> | .` | | > >> \__.` ( / > _ _ _-``:`````--..__ -_._-{_.._ `--._ ,._-:;;;;;;:::. `--._ .:::::((;;;;);;;;:. `-._ .::(;;;/;;;;;;;(;;;;::. ) .:(::;(_;;'' '';;;;::::. \ .:;(::/;; ... .. .;)::.\ | .;;(:;(:;. / \ .;::).( / `;;;;;;;;. : : .::::.) | ,:(.;(;(;. . -.^.- . .:);:;. / .;;;((;;;; .'-"-'. .:;;;:);:. | `;;;((.'`:,. '-_-' .;;;::(:;::./ .;((.`)`.`;;, .::;;;:;;;::;`. .;((.' (:::;'..:;;;;`.;;. );;::;. .(:.' /.::;;;;;; .::(, (.;(;:;;` .:' /;.;;;;; .):. ` `.:;;.` ./ /;.;;; `;'`. \;;` / |;;;. / . .;)' 3};. / /;;. | (v; | ' :;;. / /;:)| \ -` . `.__.`;:;` / .;;;:\ `. .` /;:::;. ( .;;;:| `- -` |;):, | .`;):;| |:;' \__.`;;;;;( /;;. `;;;.( |:;. `::/ /;:;` .` \ _. |;;;;. .` \ \^ /;;(;, / );;;;` .` ) / `- / ) / \ | `. .`-.` \ / `. `. .` \ \ .` \ `. .` `. \ .` \ \ LGB --lgbeard